|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Vistas of many colors at the beach
beginning lovely like a rose that buds
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I hope it wasn't nude beach so that you could see her smile and her eyes. I'm not sure about the last line, unless you were seeing yourself… Perhaps?
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|You are charming Deborah you can say so much in such few lines while painting that picture for us.
Like Jane said, a fun poem reflecting back to who you are... yourself! :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|So much goes on at the beach! This poem is fun!