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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
8/19/2012 |
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| I know what this like all too well-great poetry |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
7/27/2009 |
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How well you write of the anguish of a one sided love! Yes, the endings is superb....and just right.. A great bit of writing, Sara. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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Excellent and powerful poem,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/30/2009 |
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| Wow, great ending, this desperate plea comes full circle. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/29/2009 |
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| a very powerful emotional plea for acknowledgment and support ... |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/29/2009 |
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A write filled with emotion...or the void thereof in what was once termed love. There is much to like in this poem, but my favorite lines are the last two...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/29/2009 |
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The inTENsity of these lines - raw emotion - powerfully penned - undone, Sara. Undone -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/28/2009 |
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| wonderfully written- |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/28/2009 |
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Sara,
This is fine writing in every way, the phrasing, the repetitions, the intensity of feeling, the understanding of loss and its consequences.
John |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/28/2009 |
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Great write, Sara, of what appears to be a one-sided love affair.
The closing lines are perfect. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/28/2009 |
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| YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS WELL IN THIS WORK THAT EXPOSES THE DISDAIN THAT IS FELT WHEN IT'S OVER, BUT ONE STILL 'FEELS'. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
6/28/2009 |
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Hi Sara, This is a great example on how difficult life can be when we live on emotions. Great write, Sara....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
6/28/2009 |
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| Very nicely done, Sara! I like the repetition at the end. It can have different levels of meaning. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/28/2009 |
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Our minds are often controlled by our hearts and sadly our hearts don't always make wise choices...hope yours does. Great write girl.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/28/2009 |
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| NICE, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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