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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
9/29/2012 |
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It hurts when love breaks apart Lilly
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/28/2012 |
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If it were not for the sadness
we would not know the gladness
*Carolee* given love returns..
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
9/27/2012 |
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Always painful when a relationship breaks up, but at the end you show healing starts
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
9/27/2012 |
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Another poem for those who have suffered in a relationship, but this shows a light at the end
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/27/2012 |
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i like your style here, Lily,
spare but without compromising the theme
and elegant in phrasing
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
9/27/2012 |
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| Heart wrenching thoughts well expressed. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/27/2012 |
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| New lives to make - something many of us need to accomplish. |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/26/2012 |
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It's often very difficult to accept the things we don't wish to happen and especially when it comes to our hearts. This pain goes deep and it takes long to heal.
You beautifully end your poem with the fragile words:
~~O' parted hearts~~
~~now that which heal~~
~~new lives to make~~
~~again to feel~~
There is always hope my sweet Carolee, you say it here |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/26/2012 |
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"again to feel", yes!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/26/2012 |
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Such a turn in events..sounds like vows to breakups..truly your last stanza shows much strength to pick up and yes, again feel~
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/26/2012 |
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You share a timeless and universal theme of this life/world, Carol; at least it seems to me. Very moving and meaningful; sadness is an integral part of the whole but so is joy if one can find it. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/26/2012 |
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| Don't throw that heart away, Carol. Never throw it away, you will be needing it sooner than later. Trust me. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/26/2012 |
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i am so sorry for this deep felt pain to one who should only be blessed with love as she gives so much to others
budd |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/26/2012 |
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Yes, I believe we all have felt that pain, healed
and started all over again. Enjoyed...Carol
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| Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti |
9/26/2012 |
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| Nice rhyming flow. Great job. |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
9/26/2012 |
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I do know this kind of pain Carol, my husband did it to me. It is an awful deep painful thing and no-one should accept it. I like your quote.
Gail |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
9/26/2012 |
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This is true and unfortuneately people do tend to hurt the one they love.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy |
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