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Collateral Damage
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
Wednesday, September 26, 2012
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There are things we donít wish to happen, but must accept. Things we donít want to know but have to learn. And people we love will hurt us and we have to let them go... ~Lily of Lough Neagh~

 Collateral Damage

November’s joy
autumn’s leaves
smiling faces
both well pleased

But came the rain
it took the sun
how screams the storm
for naught was love

O’ sorrows heart
o’ damaged souls
for naught it had
been what was told

O’ parted hearts
now that which heal
new lives to make
again to feel

Carolee Dennis-Woosley
September 26, 2012

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Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
It hurts when love breaks apart Lilly

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
If it were not for the sadness
we would not know the gladness
*Carolee* given love returns..

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
Always painful when a relationship breaks up, but at the end you show healing starts

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
Another poem for those who have suffered in a relationship, but this shows a light at the end

I bow and tip my hat to you

Reviewed by John Flanagan
i like your style here, Lily,
spare but without compromising the theme
and elegant in phrasing

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Heart wrenching thoughts well expressed.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
New lives to make - something many of us need to accomplish.
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
It's often very difficult to accept the things we don't wish to happen and especially when it comes to our hearts. This pain goes deep and it takes long to heal.
You beautifully end your poem with the fragile words:
~~O' parted hearts~~
~~now that which heal~~
~~new lives to make~~
~~again to feel~~

There is always hope my sweet Carolee, you say it here
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
"again to feel", yes!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Such a turn in events..sounds like vows to breakups..truly your last stanza shows much strength to pick up and yes, again feel~
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
You share a timeless and universal theme of this life/world, Carol; at least it seems to me. Very moving and meaningful; sadness is an integral part of the whole but so is joy if one can find it. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Don't throw that heart away, Carol. Never throw it away, you will be needing it sooner than later. Trust me.
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
i am so sorry for this deep felt pain to one who should only be blessed with love as she gives so much to others
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Yes, I believe we all have felt that pain, healed
and started all over again. Enjoyed...Carol

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Nice rhyming flow. Great job.
Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
I do know this kind of pain Carol, my husband did it to me. It is an awful deep painful thing and no-one should accept it. I like your quote.

Reviewed by Ed J.
This is true and unfortuneately people do tend to hurt the one they love.

Stay well and keep writing
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