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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
5/27/2010 |
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I love doing this type of structured poem. Nicely done Regis
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Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe |
4/19/2010 |
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| You sure make this form of poetry look easy to write. Nice flow of meaning. :) |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
4/11/2010 |
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| Beautiful!!! |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/10/2010 |
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| Sorry I'm late to the party as usual. Back to the sixties it seems, be it 1960, 1860 or 0860. Beautifully stated. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/10/2010 |
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Beautiful and very thought provoking, oh that it were so and all men lived peeaceable here on earth.
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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
4/10/2010 |
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Regis,
Brilliant write as always.
Amour et paix,
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/9/2010 |
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Wow Regis this is absolutely beautiful
And the message withing is a wonderful gift
Easter is a day to rejoice and pray for Peace
I hope you had a wonderful Easter in company of Family
Brilliant I wish i could learn this style
I truly love rhyming in this piece!!
Brilliant!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light..Yolie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/9/2010 |
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| Regis this is so beautifully penned and heart touching, I don't know how I missed it before Easter. |
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| Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader) |
4/8/2010 |
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Regis, I am not a lover of this kind of poetry, BUT, you do very well with the acrostics. There is a wonderful message in this heartfelt poem! xo
Blessings & Peace, Holly |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/7/2010 |
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Regis, there is nothing forced about this gem! On the contrary it is free flowing,and inspired. A beauty to be treasured. Thanks for sharing...
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Ruth Gonzales (Reader) |
4/7/2010 |
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Thank you so much for such a message, So powerful and beautiful filled with love, we need this in this times of war, crime and filth in the world. A breakthrough in times of need and all..
Loved this one so much... It is about love and peace that we strive for. Blessings... |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
4/6/2010 |
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A powerful (Rhyming Acrostic) "Easter-Time For Peace" and the beauty of your gift really shines very brightly in this one Regis! Thank you so much for sharing and having such a caring heart!
May the Lord bless you in a special way and be always gracious to you and your family!
Much Love,
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
4/6/2010 |
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Regis...your heart so tender & offering
I thank you for embracing my heart
always through the love of your heart
Love's Bouquet...Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
4/5/2010 |
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This acrostic seems like a hard one to write, and I wonder if it was the case for you. The rhyme is not perfect everywhere, which is fine, but at times it does seem forced to me, as if you were just trying to rhyme for the sake of rhyme. This also makes the flow not always smooth for me. There is definitely something to ponder about from the content. I still liked the poem but I wish the flow was smooth throughout the whole piece. It's like you don't have a flow structure, or a pattern to the flow ... and that seems to be part of the problem.
Lena |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/5/2010 |
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| The flow is as gentle as morning breeze. Thanks for this sentimental offering |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/5/2010 |
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Perfect sentiments for these times, Regis. This poem is timeless. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/5/2010 |
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| Regis, truly you excel at these - for you it seems to be the case that the more difficult and elongated the acrostic, the better. And rhyming, too! You seem to thrive within strict poetic confines and to bring forth such seemingly effortless beauty. Peace, love and Easter joy to you always. xx |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/5/2010 |
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Indeed it is time for peace, Regis....we've wasted so many centuries on senseless brutality...I truly wish we could ALL embrace the beauty that surrounds us..well done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/5/2010 |
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Beautiful acrostic write, mon ami, c'est magnifique!
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
4/5/2010 |
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This is a nice sentiment. Maybe someday people will all wake up at once and realize that life truly is short, and that we can all have some joy from it if we work at that happiness together. After all, what other reason is there for living other than trying to find and give happiness?
Bright blessings to you and yours, Regis,
Jim |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/4/2010 |
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| Great sentiments. We prefer to kill than share our bread. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
4/4/2010 |
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| Regis, a beautiful bounty this write. If only a handful of the world could respond to these words. It would be a start...in a beautiful direction. |
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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
4/4/2010 |
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Very nice Regis. Would be nice to see total peace in the world. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
4/4/2010 |
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Wonderful Regis, as always.
Love and blessings,
ann |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
4/4/2010 |
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Regis, Just a beautiful poem! You do very well with the acrostics. You have challenged me to write again. I have missed it so. You did a wonderful job here! Love ya!
Becca |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/4/2010 |
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AMEN! THE PURE, WONDERFUL, SOUL SAVING MESSAGE OF EASTER IN A WELL DONE ACROSTIC. THANKS FOR SHARING AND HAPPY EASTER TO YOU! LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/4/2010 |
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| Let us never abandon hope. Well done |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/4/2010 |
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| Regis, your thoughts are noble and certainly Easter is a perfect time for peace to break out around the world in a pandemic of love --Happy Easter and may peace and love be with you -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/4/2010 |
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Beautiful thoughts, Regis...Happy Easter to you and yours.
Blessings, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
4/4/2010 |
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Woundrous thoughts for this Easter holiday, Reg! Prayers for Peace seem to be an ongoing plea for centuries...let them be heard in our lifetime.
Blessings and Love to you, friend - Micke |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
4/4/2010 |
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I agree 100%, it is time for peace. Well done.
Cheers and Happy Easter,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/4/2010 |
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Easter is a good start to peace for all.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/4/2010 |
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Like finding easter eggs in the wilderness, but there is always hope.
Happy Easter! Regis |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
4/4/2010 |
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| Happy Easter! |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
4/4/2010 |
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I would like to wish YOU and your loved ones a very Happy Easter.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/4/2010 |
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| Well done, Regis. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/4/2010 |
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Peace is like a homeless wrinkled old woman that nobody cares about...but, there's always hope...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
4/4/2010 |
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| BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
4/3/2010 |
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| Inspiring! Beautifully written. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Smith |
4/3/2010 |
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Very creative and instructive poem. It should be taught in Sunday school for kids from two to 102. Have a Blessed Easter.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
4/3/2010 |
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Made me smile, Regis. The pink and blue are very appropriate for this poem; the pink reiterates what the poem illustrates.
Great resolutions for a full-of good-deeds year. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
4/3/2010 |
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Mon cher Regis, que Dieu vous entende quel espoir; The time is now for peace
It is time for wars to cease. Amen mon cher is excellente. Love Emile
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
4/3/2010 |
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| Masterfully done Regis. I don't think I could have pulled this off honestly. Have a great weekend! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
4/3/2010 |
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Perhaps it was difficult to write for you, but the outcome was fantastic. And the message so meaningful. Happy Easter, Reg
Mary |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
4/3/2010 |
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Regis, This one gets a five star holiday rating! Profound poetry celebrating one of the most humbling time of the year!
God Bless you and Happy easter!
John Michael Domino |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/3/2010 |
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| What are you doing with those beautiful flowers in your yard already, they have yet to sprout here...Happy Easter to you & yours, Reg...e |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/3/2010 |
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| wonderful sentiment for this holiday season, Regis ... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/3/2010 |
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If we would all take the time to see the beauty of this world, we would not want to destroy it by wars. Too bad many don't notice its beauty.
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/3/2010 |
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Happy Ostara, Regis...Blessed Be.
Peace,
Sage |
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