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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/15/2010 |
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| WOW Amber. This is eleoquent and so beautiful,filled with passion and desire! It took my breath away!!!!..........M |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
3/15/2010 |
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My dear Amber this is powerful and beautifully written in such a unique style! I must stop by again! God bless you and be encouraged!
Much Love,
Margaret
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/15/2010 |
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| Beautifully compelling and deeper than romantic. |
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| Reviewed by Sheri Uy |
3/15/2010 |
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A deeply meaningful and passionate poem. Filled with hope and positivity. Faith is when you are sure that something you've been longing for will surely come about. Well done, Amber. Peace and love in Christ.
Sheri |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
3/15/2010 |
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A great range of emotions in this poem, Amber. I agree with Regis. I'm glad you ended this poem on a positive note, with a sense of hope. Great writing!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
3/14/2010 |
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For ever has it been that hope and faith ease the heartache of abandoned love until the cherished moment of fulfillment or until we accept the guidance of such as in my poem, "Begin Again, Ab Initio."
My dear Amber, your gentle soul expresses well the hurt so many of us have shared until our life's energy is renewed and shining once again.
With love and respect,
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/13/2010 |
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Some time soon you will see,
that there is no choice but to listen
to the wind and the sea,
and finally you will come back to me.
I love the way you end on a positive note, Amber. I can relate to what you have expressed via your verses here. I think some of us love too much and are often not understood; at least, that has been my experience on much more than one occasion. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/12/2010 |
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A most beautiful write "Amber"
I wished it was a collaboration
Love & peace be with you
William
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/12/2010 |
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I envision a dove at sea to return, this is heartfelt Amber
Love
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
3/12/2010 |
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| This is energy bounded by grace. Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/12/2010 |
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| Quite a passionate piece of poetry, Amber. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/12/2010 |
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Love should be like a boomerang, never be able to be thrown away, always coming back to teach our heart about no wishing better than we have.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
3/12/2010 |
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Love will return if it's meant to be your's Amber, if not then it was never meant to be. Great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader) |
3/12/2010 |
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| A passionate write Amber...I did enjoy. Blessings Holly |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo |
3/12/2010 |
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| This was absolutely beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
3/12/2010 |
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Wow Amber your verse in this lovely piece is breathtaking. What a fool he is if he does not come back to beautiful YOU.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
3/12/2010 |
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...an embracing offering Viv!
listening to the root of our soul
this is where Love's Bounty resides
Love & Zephyr's Ensoulments
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/12/2010 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/12/2010 |
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Reminds of the saying about "if you love something set it free" except this is the opposite end where it was set free and now the waiting is painfully hard...
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/11/2010 |
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What an interesting photograph! Oh Amber how well this flows and with such strong emotions embedded within. You sound so sad and I hope you are okay...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/11/2010 |
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| such love and longing- well done |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
3/11/2010 |
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| Touching. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Angela Ciero |
3/11/2010 |
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Very touching & passionate!
God bless!
Angela |
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