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I See You Coming Back To Me
by Amber V Moonstone
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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"I See You, Coming Back To Me"

by Amber "V" Moonstone


I am lost without your touch,
Wandering in a lonely state of confusion,
Looking for stars to align,
and the moon to illuminate my thoughts.

Once upon a cool summer's eve,
we faced each other in dynamic silhouettes,
a force that had our hearts and souls swirling
through parallel Universes.

Now the energy signature of those moments,
are fading quickly, but sometimes,
star dust lends a bit of light
and moonbeams transfer glimmering moments of hope.

Why have you left me?
Can you see that I desire your energy signature,
are you blinded by the darkness of fear?
Can you not see your way out of your storm!

Look clearly toward the heavens,
see the angel's light guiding your heart,
transporting you toward my shore,
where I await, filled with longing and desire.

You are:

the breath that fills my being,
The fuel that quenches my fire
The bond that never ends,
The light that erases my darkness.

Some time soon you will see,
that there is no choice but to listen
to the wind and the sea,
and finally you will come back to me.

"I See You, Coming Back To Me" (c)
Amber "V" Moonstone  3/11/10


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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 3/15/2010
WOW Amber. This is eleoquent and so beautiful,filled with passion and desire! It took my breath away!!!!..........M
Reviewed by Inspire Hope 3/15/2010
My dear Amber this is powerful and beautifully written in such a unique style! I must stop by again! God bless you and be encouraged!

Much Love,

Thank you for stopping by!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 3/15/2010
Beautifully compelling and deeper than romantic.
Reviewed by Sheri Uy 3/15/2010
A deeply meaningful and passionate poem. Filled with hope and positivity. Faith is when you are sure that something you've been longing for will surely come about. Well done, Amber. Peace and love in Christ.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy 3/15/2010
A great range of emotions in this poem, Amber. I agree with Regis. I'm glad you ended this poem on a positive note, with a sense of hope. Great writing!
Reviewed by Richard Orey 3/14/2010
For ever has it been that hope and faith ease the heartache of abandoned love until the cherished moment of fulfillment or until we accept the guidance of such as in my poem, "Begin Again, Ab Initio."

My dear Amber, your gentle soul expresses well the hurt so many of us have shared until our life's energy is renewed and shining once again.

With love and respect,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/13/2010
Some time soon you will see,
that there is no choice but to listen
to the wind and the sea,
and finally you will come back to me.

I love the way you end on a positive note, Amber. I can relate to what you have expressed via your verses here. I think some of us love too much and are often not understood; at least, that has been my experience on much more than one occasion. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/12/2010
A most beautiful write "Amber"
I wished it was a collaboration
Love & peace be with you

Reviewed by Christine Alwin 3/12/2010
I envision a dove at sea to return, this is heartfelt Amber
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 3/12/2010
This is energy bounded by grace. Bravo!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/12/2010
Quite a passionate piece of poetry, Amber.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 3/12/2010
Love should be like a boomerang, never be able to be thrown away, always coming back to teach our heart about no wishing better than we have.


Reviewed by Rose Rideout 3/12/2010
Love will return if it's meant to be your's Amber, if not then it was never meant to be. Great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader) 3/12/2010
A passionate write Amber...I did enjoy. Blessings Holly
Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo 3/12/2010
This was absolutely beautiful.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 3/12/2010
Wow Amber your verse in this lovely piece is breathtaking. What a fool he is if he does not come back to beautiful YOU.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 3/12/2010 embracing offering Viv!
listening to the root of our soul
this is where Love's Bounty resides
Love & Zephyr's Ensoulments
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 3/12/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/12/2010
Reminds of the saying about "if you love something set it free" except this is the opposite end where it was set free and now the waiting is painfully hard...
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 3/11/2010
What an interesting photograph! Oh Amber how well this flows and with such strong emotions embedded within. You sound so sad and I hope you are okay...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 3/11/2010
such love and longing- well done
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 3/11/2010
Touching. Liz
Reviewed by Angela Ciero 3/11/2010
Very touching & passionate!
God bless!

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