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Mackerel Sky
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, January 19, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman

Rivers of clouds swim overhead,
parting blue with sure, even strokes.
It's a Mackerel sky.  I, at
the ocean bottom of air, think
about fish:  do they see human
beings in their waters, above?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/19)


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Reviewed by Cryssa C 1/22/2008
I love it! We used to say that clouds like that were corrugated fields that had just been corrugated
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 1/21/2008
I agree with Georg, Mmmm!
This poem is very creative Karla
with the inspiration of the quilted looking sky above!
Wicked Kewl picture!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxoo

STay Positive!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/20/2008
I think I'll have fish for dinner.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/20/2008
Actually fish swim amongst us...right off the beach, all kinds of them...if people knew how many sharks were at their feet, they would NEVER go in the ocean...Ed
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/20/2008
Much Food for Thought - and what a picture!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/20/2008
The only mackerel I like is the one served grilled on my plate with new potatos and sourcream.(with Coors...of course)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/20/2008
Awesome picture...exceelent write to complement it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 1/20/2008
Beautiful thoughts, Karla. Your poems are always such a pleasure to read!
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill 1/19/2008
Your mind won't stop, will it? LOL
Good question! And I have to say that you guys have the coolest clouds in Texas!
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 1/19/2008
Holy Makarel...gorgeous poem. Write on na dthank you for your prayers and blessings for my son's family.

love and blessings!
Reviewed by John Leko 1/19/2008
...great simple beauty...

although...Jerry's review below...has me to the gills in laughter.

excellent Karla...

Reviewed by Charlie 1/19/2008
This is exactly how I used to think the world was-- water with fish in it, air above where humans dwelled-- then sky where birds were a different kind of fish, and from there, the ozone where clouds grazed like cattle, and above that... and on and on... Your poem is emaculate. I'm saving it. --Charlie
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/19/2008
cool question! enjoyed the write
Reviewed by J. Pajot 1/19/2008
Really like they? you got me wondering.
May you have all the wonderous joys this life can offer,
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 1/19/2008
Hmm, a write to ponder upon my friend...excellent image and write enjoyed!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 1/19/2008
Sure they do and that's why they pee in the water . . .
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/19/2008
Your image and poem are excellent,,, very well done Karla,, can't answer the question hmmmmm ????
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/19/2008
Splendid poem, Karla...awesome photo too!

love, Carole~
Reviewed by Jean Pike 1/19/2008
Karla, this poem is fantastic. Elegant in its simplicity. Lovely photo, too.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/19/2008

Now that is a thought provoker if there ever was one! LOL Very well penned and illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Bonnie May 1/19/2008
I would like to know how yu do this? Its amazing. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 1/19/2008
Beautiful Karla thank you for sharing
God Bless

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