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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
10/18/2011 |
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excellent work Mary
hug
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
9/8/2011 |
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| a lovely description of a tortoise, Mary. I hope man is able to save the Desert tortoise. thanks for reading my poem. Laurel |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/26/2011 |
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| A VERY GOOD SHARING; I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS SPECIES OF TORTOISE'S HABITS. INFORMATIVE AND ENJOYED...THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/31/2008 |
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Well written! Very thoughfully expressed!
God gives us so much and we need to be caretakers of the gifts He provides.
GOD bless you!
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) |
7/27/2008 |
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| loved the message excellent poem |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
7/21/2008 |
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| great message-i really enjoyed this-you let us enter their world and see life from their perspective, wonderful nature poetry. xxm |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
7/21/2008 |
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Another one I didn't know about that is having a hard time sharing habitat with man. A shame, as we too in FL have a "gopher tortoise that is endangered for a similar reason: whenever they build new homes his underground tunnels are destroyed and he likely buried alive to smother.
I wish you had a jpg picture to post. I've never seen one. Are they beautiful? It's tough to be a "slow creature in a fast world" |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
7/21/2008 |
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Excellent poem and thoughts. It's not just the animals that we mess with. It's their habitat. They can't live if we turn their world upside down.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/19/2008 |
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So true
is all I have to say about this brilliant nature write
True a great creation of our heavenly Father
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/19/2008 |
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| A great sharing Mary .. I enjoyed the information about the turtles. You are right about man leaving them alone!...M |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
7/18/2008 |
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A wonderful and worthy write about one of God's creatures that humans have taken a tole on...well done, write on dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/18/2008 |
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A worthy tibute Mary. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/17/2008 |
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This has special meaning for me - I won't say why - but it has, and it moves me more than you know.
John |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/17/2008 |
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they would be with us so much longer if Man
would learn to leave them alone.
So very sadly happening to far too many of nature's wondrous creatures these days. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/16/2008 |
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How sad that so many of our animal friends are slowly and unfortunately quietly slipping in the isles of time basically unnoticed. Another of God's creatures to succumb to fate, making me wonder when it will be mankinds turn....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/16/2008 |
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Mary,
I've never heard of the desert tortoise! You educate with compassionate lines of caring - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
What man has done to God's creatures is a shame. They seem determined to live a lonely existance ... and they're killing each other off, too. When will it end? |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
7/16/2008 |
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This is very very true. I wish that more writers
and poets would stand up for endangered species.
This is beautiful and meaningful poetry Mary.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/16/2008 |
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This is a lovely poem.I always love watching a tortoise.At the end of you poem,I agree with it 100 percent.I enjoy reading this poem a lot.take care
Edwin |
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