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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
10/28/2008 |
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capture of a camera Eileen, you truly painted the scene, good and mean
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
10/27/2008 |
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| One of your all-time best! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/27/2008 |
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| you have captured the moment with gusto, vivid imagery and an emotional release that is contagious ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/27/2008 |
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Brings back vivid images of visits to California beaches in winter, when the only respite was a glassed in restaurant with a view. I could feel this one.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/27/2008 |
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| Storms must resonate with you, Eileen, because you have caught their moods and motions so very completely with your acute and vibrant descriptions. Paradoxically, as much as I thrill to sun'n'sea, it is also these weather conditions that totally exhilarate, too... as long as there's a cuppa Earl Grey within g(r)asping distance! :)) Screaming into that whipped-up wind is a GREAT way to let off steam unheard! To be recommended! Then comes the contented smile... xx |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/27/2008 |
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Eileen,
Scripted with breathtaking precision . . . powerful!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/27/2008 |
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Stunningly imaged, I felt the power of the waves and storm: well done, Eileen. A StormSpinner type of write: wish I'd written this one!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/27/2008 |
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..I felt like I was standing right along side you,,,I could feel the temperature drop.... and the calm after the storm. Well Done!
Love,Christine |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
10/27/2008 |
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| Everytime I come to this site I leave with such beauty and love in my heart. I almost hate to leave but the poem ends, I just can't sit here, can I? Yes, I will sit here for awhile and take in more of this beautiful write. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
10/27/2008 |
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| Refuge from the raging sea sound good to me, especially with rum and tea, or for you yanks caffee ha, Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/27/2008 |
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Another beauty from your golden pen, Eileen; I'm undone by your words! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/27/2008 |
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| sounds absolutely lovely! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/27/2008 |
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Quite a powerful piece, Tiger Lily - love the music, too.
PS Don't talk to strangers in that Boardwalk Cafe; Undercover Jersey Ed is on the prowl! |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/27/2008 |
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I love the ocean but would rather watch the storm from an inclosed area. Thank you for sharing a well described story within your words Eileen.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
10/27/2008 |
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| well said |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/27/2008 |
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| I LOVE the ocean in a storm, its the best time to be on the beach communing with mom ocean...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/26/2008 |
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Anyone drinking rumcoffee doesn't need the excuse of a storm, they just will whipped a storm just for have one.
Now there is the sixtifour dollars question, what did you said to it, to the seas to make it so mad? because it wasn'st just walking on the beach, you said something under your breath thinking nobody would hear and then WHAM! the seas did.
Next time order one for me too.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
10/26/2008 |
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Those sea winds are powerful.I like the ending of the poem.take care of yourself
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/26/2008 |
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| The ocean is mighty soothing but in a storm you have to let it play out. |
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