|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Orange you clever. Love the orangutan photo. They are
so cute and very intelligent.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|I love them too, Patrick! Very cute write...
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Great write, Patrick.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You had me listening with rapt attention!
Between the sweet lines about these gentle souls, you invite us to go deeper, not to miss out on the real happinesses in life!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Rhyme or not...Patrick...
I loved this!!!!
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|I TRIED DOING IT, PATRICK...TO THE POINT OF BECOMING A FRETTER
SITTING HERE...MUTTERING 'OR-ANGE', 'OR-ANGE', 'OR-ANGE'
WENT THROUGH THE ALPHABET, YES I DID...LETTER BY LETTER
AND THE CLOSEST I GOT WAS THIS LOT; BINGE, FRINGE, SINGE & CRINGE
THERE WAS A FELLOW CALLED ORANGE
WHO WAS ACCUSTOMED TO THROWING A BINGE
HIS WIFE WAS A FRETTER
SHE PRAYED HE'D GET BETTER
WHEN SHE SAW HE WAS COMING SHE'D CRINGE
LOVED IT! THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|I love them too.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
|PAT ... THIS IS NOTHING SHORT OF ... SUPERB !
'ORANGE' U GLAD YER NOT A 'LEMON'?
|Reviewed by Richard King
|"... A mind just slightly duller" obviously a judgment call, but you have conveniently forgotten about “yer cousins." Dick|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I knew it was really a compliment when my wife started calling me 'Monkey Brain!'|
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|you got me(smile)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|methinks, a syringe in the orange works ... i know you orange happy i tried ...|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Slightly duller, but just slightly, he'd probably, have a few choice words for you, this orange tan, maybe even a bit of revenge,,,,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
great, I enjoyed this one immensely. hurray for our cousins the orangutans
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Yes you do look like ur relatives,
Those that do hang in trees,
By their tails, sometimes their knees,
You may be an Ed cuzin,
But to monkeys you are more closer to blood,
No baths do you take, just like them, dirty as crud...Jurseeeeeey
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Oh, I am aware about the non-rhyming orange, Patrick. Drove me batshit one day trying for a rhyme. I agree with you about the orangutan. They are as close to humans I guess as is any animal. Enjoyed this poem today. Love the orangutans!|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|So, if you asked a Yiddish scholar, he'd say to you: "Orange, shmorng. See, there is always a way out of every problem. Aren't you glad you have such brilliant friends?
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Great write, but this isn't fair. I've been going over in my head what rhymes with orange, well we know about that one! Take care.