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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
4/10/2008 |
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| Excellent write Lil Brother but I agree with Ed somewhat. Some miscreants might slip through and mess up utopia as well. In gatitude forever for caring and sharing.. Grangran-n-Baba |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
4/9/2008 |
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| The 'remedy' is matchless and the supervision, well, comforting? Depends. Interesting write here. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/9/2008 |
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You bring out many fine points and yes, it is about time for us all to pay attention and be kinder to mother earth...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Little Flower |
4/9/2008 |
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| Sorry 0 there is no place on earth that is safe--the only place to go is called Heaven--Eternal Life--we will all be there in the end days when earth is no longer--there are two places in eternal life HEAVEN AND HELL - Hell is where the bad people go and they will endure eternal fire--Heaven is for the good people and there will be Peace and joy FOR EVER. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/9/2008 |
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| A powerful look at our ailing Earth. Well penned and thought provoking. |
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| Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle |
4/9/2008 |
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Very eye opening poem. Don't you know that people are the virus
of the Earth? for millions of years animals have learned to respect the Earth's gifts and lived side by side with Nature. Man has always tried to conquer Nature and has enough Ego to believe they can win. But Nature and Earth know much better. Sorrow for Mankind when they finally figure out what a treasure they are destroying with their greed and selfishness.
thought provoking and sad but true and needed to be written!
katie |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/9/2008 |
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| This is a frightening piece Abdi Noor precisely because it rings so true. I hope I'm long gone before it all comes to an end! Excellent write!...ET |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/9/2008 |
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To save earth from its own people
Hard to imagine that Mother Earth's greatest enemy are her own children; yet, it is so sadly and horribly true. But I, for one, truly hope that after we destroy Earth, we don't zoom off in our spaceships to destroy another of God's glorious planets. |
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