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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/23/2012 |
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| I don't know how I missed this one Starman cause I used to be called Da Pizzaman! BRAVO! You got good taste! |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
6/24/2009 |
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The Crunchy Crust is the BEST!
It was shared! and didn't I read "THIS" poem months ago? hmmm Sounds very very familiar! and some of the comments too, I looked down, and didn't see my comment left, so I am leaving one now!
Pizza of any kind
a hot treat so sublime
then again a Corona and a
chicken sandwich would rate
this night a pure in heaven.
In Pizza it must be mushrooms
chicken and pineapple
what a heavenly divinity
of a threesome! Mmm!
Mmm! Good!
with sauce and cheese
it's as scrumptious as can be!
Warmest Blessings, Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo
WRITE ON! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/4/2009 |
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You have done well with this metaphorical write, Rockie. Thanks for sharing. BTW, pizza is one of my favorite foods. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
2/28/2009 |
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One of my favorite foods, tied with chicken salad. A great play on those yummy slices:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
2/27/2009 |
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| Pizza... has all the major food groups and yet too much of it will kill ya. A cleaver write and fun and now I have to go get something to eat, thanks. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/25/2009 |
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Hmmmmmmmmm, now you are making me hungry for my number one food, ice cream is second, m & m" a close third....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
2/25/2009 |
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| Verrrrry tasty. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
2/25/2009 |
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| You left a delightful taste in my mouth with this yummy write...love and hugs, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/25/2009 |
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Nice use of metaphors...
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by 000 000 |
2/25/2009 |
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That first bite..always the best.
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/25/2009 |
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New York, Atlantic Avenue, just a small pizza parlor with a stone oven and the most delicious slices you will ever tasted.
Eat pizza all over Italy, compared with that NY one they all were a few notches down the scale, my tongue screamed to me "It's not the same! ! ! "
Life can be a bitch also.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/25/2009 |
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Mmmmm. Now this is poetry to sink your teeth into. :) 'Shrooms and bell peppers, my favorite!! Well done, Rockie.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/25/2009 |
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I love pizza, and I adore this write! Super use of metaphors!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Darn ya, Rockie: you've done made me hungry for P I Z Z A!!!! LOL |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/25/2009 |
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Great poem,I like the metaphor you use.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
2/24/2009 |
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I love Pizza, but being Italain I love most things Italain, great write, and a great use of Metaphors
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
2/24/2009 |
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I think the best part of the pizza
For me is the crust especially
Stuff with cheese
Yes you are correct pepperoni is a lover's delight!
Poetry and pizza a great combo of life!!
Brilliant write a slice of life
Love it!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/24/2009 |
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| ...if you dont like the crusts, Rufuz will take them, he loves them crusts...e |
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