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Skip Me Along the Water
by Andrew Rafalski
Rated "G" by the Author.
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a bourbon afternoon
skipping stones and tomes

I am a stone
a flat stone
a smooth stone
carved by the waves

Skip me along the water
count the skips.
Over four is good

Fool the fish who try to
catch me,
smack’em on the fishlip
on the fourth bounce
fool the fish,

fish the fool
out of water
out of sun
raisins in the moon
with cheese on the side

Epilogue - A poet’s tale:
I’ll pretend to write
while
you pretend to like

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I do like it. It makes me think. Love and peace to you, Andrew. Regis
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Most of the writes I comment on, I do enjoy.....
Thanks for your comment on the sketch
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
This was quite the image! I enjoyed the fun in it! Lisa
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
A fanciful tale that grows more delightful with each read, but I dont play pretend anymore. :)
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
raisins in the moon
with cheese on the side

--love these lines.
Reviewed by Ann Piatt
hahaha. I don't know if i should have laughed or not...but the ending was humorous to me...so often how i feel about my own writing. This was good stuff...and i like the idea of being a flat stone skipping across the water...what a ride that would be!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I do like;-)! Good to read you, it's been a long time!
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