Blue Sky Field
by Dawn Richerson
Friday, December 31, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Sometimes in dreams I am wrapped
inside your arms and resting safe,
becoming who I am and was
always meant to be.
On other nights, in other dreams,
you sit and pray as I fight to shed
skin too tight, to break free into
a world that waits for me.
Such agony to inch along,
knowing I could fly – if only
I could find the place where you are,
learn to let it be.
Such joy I find in dreams when we
explore brown earth, green canopy,
working side by side, day by day,
doing what we can do.
In dreams I treasure most of all
we become a blur of color,
flying, frolicking, fluttering
through forever flowers.
You become again treasured friend
I thought that you had been. And life,
blue sky field – our rightful home, and
love, the air we breathe.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/3/2005 |
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(((dawn)))
this is precious, so beautiful and moving--a soaring tribute that reaches blue sky fields :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/2/2005 |
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| Dreams are wonderful, Dawn. You say it well in these verses. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) |
1/1/2005 |
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| Flowing tribute. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/1/2005 |
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| a beautiful poem, Dawn....always dare to dream... |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
1/1/2005 |
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| Another fine poem, Dawn. I liked this a lot. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/1/2005 |
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| Fantastic poem of on-going struggle, birthing and determination to truly become "who we are meant to be" - I can so relate! But, once the journey is begun, nothing can prevent the metamorphosis from taking place - even if the "labour" is protracted!! Beautiful language, images and lines here, Dawn: "And life, blue sky field - our rightful home, and love, the air we breathe". Your title and epithet: blue sky field - will stay with me a long time. Bless you and thank you for this... may you continue to "grow" and take further flight in 2005! LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/1/2005 |
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beautiful poem ...
flying, frolicking, fluttering
through forever flowers.
very nice alliteration ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/31/2004 |
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| Wonderful beautiful write. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
12/31/2004 |
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| Great write. I hope we can all live out of dreams while awake. Enjoyed. Happy New Year. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
12/31/2004 |
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Always hold on to your dreams, Dawn. I hope they all come true in the New Year.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
12/31/2004 |
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| I definetly beleive in dreams as Dave says and somtimes we remember best what we have loved the most. |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
12/31/2004 |
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| I believe in dreams, I believe in hope. We need to stay in the "real" world, but dreams can come true. Never forget your dreams. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/31/2004 |
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| Beautiful dreams Dawn, can they come true? I hope for your sake they can. Hope 2005 is filled with all the desires of your heart! Happy New Year! |
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