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Intimate moments with a special person
by Patrick J McCormick
Tuesday, March 08, 2005
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A poem to my Great Love

Intimate moments with a special person.


When I think of my intimate moments of life,

The peace and contentment and absence of strife

There was more that one lady I shared them with

Those moments of passion and moments of bliss.

As I try to recall all those moments gone by

All those earlier moments how hard I must try

To remember them and what they did mean.

It is even harder to remember the scene.

As I struggle and struggle and try to recall,

I soon come to realize they were not intimate at all.

To be intimate is more than just biological drive

It is two people who to understand each other do strive.

From the very first night with my fine lady I sat

We just sat and talked of this and of that.

We became friends, then buddies before anything else

And the welfare of the other was the same as of self.

To this very day we can still sit and talk

But best of all is to talk as we walk

Round the streets of our neighborhood just before dusk.

Those walks are so peaceful, so quiet and so hushed.

As we walk hand in hand or with our arms round each other

If anyone is watching we do not even bother.

As we walk and we talk we are only aware

Of each other and if others are watching just let them stare.

They will soon realize those old fuddy-duddies at dusk

Are so much in love, they talk, as all true lovers must.

We are halves of each other and when we come together

We must talk to each other so the other knows whether

Our love was still strong as we went through our day

And just what has happened while each half was away.

To others I say when you go home tonight

Donít turn on the TV just turn on the light,

And sit there and talk to the one you love best.

That intimacy alone will take care of the rest.

I will miss my great love if she is first to go

And the other way round it still will be so.

I will look down from above as she goes through her life

To still love and protect her, that love of my life



A poem by P.J. McCormick

Copyright Mar 9, 2005
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Reviewed by ALMA NELSON-PIKLE 11/9/2013
Absolutely beautiful and so heart touching....Kudos to you sir; this was and excellent read that makes it so much more beautiful because it's true. I too feel that way about my hubby; he is my best friend. Thank you for sharing, this was awesome and such a reminder of how beautiful love is and how beautiful the spoken language can be. Keep on writing....
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/9/2008
Had a good time talking with my hubby Tom, We always could talk things over and agreed before marriage that that is what would hold our marriage together. It lasted til death parted him from me, a very sad time, I felt I had to go with him too and soon, but now 8 months and still grieving but still here. He will be waiting at the pearly gates for me to enter in, that is a nice thought to keep me going. Thanks for the write, so romantic and sentimental. We both were that too and life was worth living then with him.
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 6/18/2007
This was so beautiful and blissfully romantic! You possess what everybody dreams of, but few actually get! Blessing and happiness to You and Your Lady Love! SC
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins 12/4/2006
What happened Patrick? There is so much hustle and bustle today. People don't take time to know one another before the relationship that perhaps should not have been is ruined by making a move too soon. This is so wonderful. I feel like singing 'how much is that doggie in the window, the one with the waggly tail, I do hope that doggies for sale'. While I walk and hold hands. (SMILE)
Reviewed by CJ Heck 12/4/2006
Hello Patrick, nice to 'meet' you.
This is romantic poetry at its best and I commend you. I do hope you gave your love a copy of this beautiful poem.
My warmest regards,
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 11/16/2006

This is splendid poetry, which goes beyond the mundane...and into the realm of being connected spiritually. Having this depth of appreciation, for this kind of love which you share, guarantees its continuance.

God bless you both.
Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame 9/3/2006
Well seems you have been greatly blessed in finding and reconnecting with your true love..your Twin Soul..congratulations!
I'm elated when I find yet another Twin Flame couple reconnected..expand the light you are and touch many lives..none will be the same because of the you and your Beloved..bravo!!
A beautiful it!
This is going into my library.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 8/2/2006
Oh Patrick
So beautiful!! Perfect expression of love! True soulmateship there!!
Congratulations on finding the one who completes you!
A fabulous joyful write and journey!!
Love and friendship Suzie :-D
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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/24/2005

Yes, indeed - a very exacting, beautiful, emotive, and lovely poetic write ... wonderful!!

Best to you,

Reviewed by S Cardin 3/23/2005
This is a beautiful and romantic poem. Well written.
Reviewed by L. Figgins 3/22/2005
A soulmate is a twin soul. A rare and beautiful thing when its found. You are truly fortunate, Patrick...
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/20/2005
Excellent....romantic n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 3/19/2005
What a full understanding of love and life this reveals: soulful intimate times are what grand memories are made of. Beautiful verse and tribute to your "special person", Mr. Patrick J. McCormick!

Micke Jinks
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/13/2005
Those who really love aspire to the love that you describe in your verses here, Patrick. I feel just the way Chanti put it. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 3/11/2005
(sniffles) this is soooooooooo great Pat. And you are so right too. Intimacy does not mean having just sex. It means having a relationship of trust, of communication, of laughter, of sadness, of raising your children the best you know how. Giving presents that don't cost too much, but having the thought of giving him (her) something nice. This and many other things are what an intimate relationship is all about. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by jude forese 3/10/2005
a very romantic testament of your love ...
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 3/10/2005
Romanticlly beautiful caring poem
what a wonderful tribute to the one you love

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/9/2005

Exquisite, tender expression of love...BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 3/9/2005
Dear Paddy,
This touched me so much I was moved to tears. What a beautiful romantic poem written from the very depths of your heart. This is the kind of love I aspire to. Many blessings to you...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/9/2005
this is beautiful, paddy! thanks for sharing; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by A PAX 3/9/2005
You are blessed! This is love, this is companionship, and total delight in each other...........
wonderful poem.........and its a keeper!
pax A
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 3/9/2005
Beautiful in all respects. R
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 3/9/2005
Now this is one to read and reread you did it so well.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/9/2005
well said
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/9/2005
A marvelous ode to your soul mate, Patrick. And how true that becoming and staying friends is truly the key to any long term relationship. Well Done!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 3/9/2005
This is so soft, so romantic, so strong, so peaceful, a loud strong message of true love and all that it is. So beautiful it brings tears to my eyes. Just sways gracefully into my heart. Your heart beating peacfully as is your mind, and now mine.
I could go on and on here.
Beautiful and Strong.
Thank You Pat for showing me and teaching me when true love comes along, I now will know.
Thank You
Love Tracey xoox
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