Il Deserto: Ecstasy Saguaro
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Sage Sweetwater
Sunday, January 22, 2006
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Il Deserto: Ecstasy Saguaro
Ecstasy Saguaro,
follow
me to the next
line please,
Ecstasy Saguaro
follows the
trail of the
javelina and
cactus wrens,
unconcerned with
who it offends,
Ecstasy Saguaro
opens her pod
for you,
froth,
strains
seeds of
female
essence,
you know she
runs through
your veins
on this side
of the fence
lovely ferment,
intoxicating
scent.
same process
making a woman
as saguaro wine,
follow me to the
next line please,
I print your
label,
are your emotions
stable?
Is your pod ready
to harvest?
follow me to the
next line please,
pipes running
with juice of
female essence.
Ecstasy Saguaro.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/23/2006 |
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Another joie de vivre Sage creation!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/23/2006 |
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Sage,
Uniquely penned, lovingly created, you describe inner woman brilliantly! Slighly tangy, definately zesty...and yes, delightful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/23/2006 |
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| Reminds me of the confection by Meltis - Newbury Fruits... do you have them Stateside?! Tangy jelly(o) with a sweet liquid capsule locked inside... They were my Mother's favourite... I wonder why??... she WAS quite a sauce box!! :)) And this girl looks about as handy with a gun as I would be with a whip... Gotta luv this, Sage... it is just so pert and cheeky - and, if line-dancing is involved, count me in!! :)) This warms me up nicely for non-stop Samba and Sangria in Margarita in a few weeks... Reckon I shall get to learn how to hug a cactus there, too... |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
1/23/2006 |
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| The photo of the very supine saguaro goes very well with this poem. I get the image of a strong woman with a soft inner core. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
1/23/2006 |
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Sage,..Peter has said what I have been meaning to ,...trying too.
there is a creative Brilliance to your work and Courage beyond the adverage. You seem to have a powerful GOOD strength and you create
special poems and writing from your courageous heart and I want to thank you for taking the time to really process my work with your
wisdom and I haven't let you know just how much you have moved me with your strength,....Be blessed with holy Goodness and love and peace to you',
Rich Criso |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/23/2006 |
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Very creative and explicit write Sage
You treat us to a stark and intense study of the essence of a woman
Your boldness and imagination takes you places, other artists would be
afraid to venture !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
1/23/2006 |
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| such intensity in your poetry, well penned as always. |
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| Reviewed by Jena Ayro |
1/23/2006 |
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The longer her offering
of Saguaro is, the more her
pod opens exposeing its puffy
folds dripping with her
Juices filled with seeds
that stain the Saguaros
length, scoreing as if it
had pulsateing veins
Leading to the succulent
saps, fermenting froths, that
thickens with her fleshy scents
In abundance as her fruit bears
its caseing of her swelled seed,
ready to be drank with glee, as
she becomes noisily intoxicated
Harvesting, pod to pod with each
squishy movement to obtain her
exhilarates of win juice, dribbleing
through her lips continuously all
night
She intoxicates her faculties |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
1/22/2006 |
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You are a true artist Sage! So diverse, colourful, and unique!!
Love Suzie xox :-)
'you know she
runs through
your veins' |
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