Drawn To Her Blue Flame
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Sage Sweetwater
Tuesday, January 24, 2006
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Drawn To Her Blue Flame
Foreplay,
begins first
with her
blue flame.
I am drawn
to her flame,
entering the
universe of
her mystical
sexual fire.
She had to know
fire comes after
the thunderclap
raindance.
I put blue
flame to
votive candles,
chant before her
and Gaia's altar
where I touch
her fire point on
my pentacle,
five-pointed
star; air, earth,
fire, water,
spirit.
Jupiter, my birth
planet, fire my
element,
I am blazing,
but I do this
to her in stage
of flame.
Do you know
how very hard
it is to hold back
your red flame?
Do you know
how very hard
it is to hold back
licking each one
of your hot spots?
I am the keeper
of her flame,
intent on capturing
her erotic flicker in
3-D,
so to keep the tips
of her flame sharp.
My ability to deliver
her authentic flame
lets us explore her
blue emotions, those
are sky felt.
Would you now
like to meet your
yellow flame?
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
1/31/2006 |
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I am Sagittarius, so my birth planet is also Jupiter and Fire is my element and I relate well to this series.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/26/2006 |
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| the sensuality of blue comes through in this most creative poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/25/2006 |
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In my even more immature days I would have said something daft like can I watch... Boy am I glad I've outgrown those days.
The worse thing was when I found out that a girl I had been friends with and had always fancied was gay.
Now I know why you hate blokes. If I was you I'd hate me too, for me writing all this well erm rubbish really or trash as you might say, if you said it politely that is. I shut up before a flame burns me.
Oh burns! it is Burnsday in Scotland today.. bad link I guess... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/25/2006 |
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wow, sage, this is hot! very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/25/2006 |
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Sage,
I can't WAIT to see the yellow flame of communion. GAD, what a fiery, passionate write--love it. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/25/2006 |
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You conjure another masterpiece of red hot and flickering flame, that epitomises the mystique and mystery of feminity !
The picture is extraordinarily symbolic, and we look forward to the Yellow Flame in expectation Sage !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/25/2006 |
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Outstanding. This is so very excellent! So very powerful and sensual,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
1/25/2006 |
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OOOOH yes please! if the yellow flame is as hot as this? deffo! I feel the feminine energy washing over me in torrents, such is the power of this little invocation. Superb Sage.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
1/25/2006 |
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| Fantastic! You do such a wonderful job of bringing to life a woman's inner strength and sensuality. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/25/2006 |
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| Sounds like a real fun thing to be doing, here, Sage. The keeper of the flame not only has her flame to worry about, but also there is that niggling pressure to not allow said glame to flicker and waver and eventually extinguish itself because the stoker of the flame has been unattentive. Gotta watch that, don't you know? |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
1/25/2006 |
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you're a flaming star, sage! your ring of fire must be heavenly.
A column of love verse that would draw a moth to a flame.
The way a shot of whisky warms the stomach, this poem
must bring a glow to every daughter of sappho.
A Greek temple, a tent beside the river, a back booth in the saloon,
wherever sage goes, she draws flame as kingfishers catch fire... |
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| Reviewed by Jena Ayro |
1/24/2006 |
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She ignites, her, with her mystical
ways, pulling up her flame
Its light that shes lureing from the
center, shes, fire blazeing the
way
Moveing with exactness, each move
controled, each hot area kept ready,
just for her
Licks, drawing up her flame, to its
pointed delight, red hot exciteing,
mixed with blue, brings strength with
her lavender boosts
Their monitoring her stired energys,
the heat she produces, for her, reaching
the distances of space, flickering,
hopefully
To ascend to her ambered luminations
Sage
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
1/24/2006 |
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This one is a real flame jumper, Sage!
Nicely done,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/24/2006 |
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A rainbow of flames to color your fantasy! beautiful work Sage!
eileen |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
1/24/2006 |
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Positively brilliant. Rare as a beautiful, bejeweled firebrand
who happens to bear the name Sage Sweetwater. Love the
illustration, too!! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/24/2006 |
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| Bring it on, girl...Ed |
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