Drawn To Her Orange Flame
by
Sage Sweetwater
Thursday, January 26, 2006
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Drawn To Her Orange Flame
Second base and one-half,
to be effective, has to convey an everlasting image,
I am drawn to her flame, entering the universe of her mystical sexual fire.
I put orange flame to votive candles,
chant before her and Gaia's altar, I prepare her for the clitoral marriage of flame;
with this flame, I do thee wed the flames in our relationship to burn as One.
I am blazing, but I do this to her in stage of flame.
Do you know how very hard it is to hold back your red flame?
Do you know how very hard it is to hold back licking each one of your hot spots?
I am the keeper of her flame,
intent on capturing her erotic flicker in 3-D,
so to keep the tips of her flame sharp.
My ability to deliver her authentic flame lets us explore her orange emotions, those are clitorally felt.
The brand has to convey the hottest image of desire, her and I in blazing passion embrace, as I know now she is available to me,
where labias can now touch, become one, not knowing where my wetness ends and hers begins,
our Clitoris becomes a sizzling intumesce offshoot of the clitoral flame, formed from sparks of inital S I am branding deep within her,
pounding kettledrum thunder, riding the flame as One.
Would you like to meet your lavender flame?
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by Kristian Robinson |
12/28/2008 |
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| I really love this poem because for 1, my favorite color is orange and 2, it speaks to me in a very sensational way. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
1/31/2006 |
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I always thought that the blue flame was the hottest ... I must have been misled because, to me, this is the hottest of the series.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
1/27/2006 |
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| Another wonderful poem in this unfolding series... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/27/2006 |
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You keep hitting new heights of sensuality in these colorful poems...bring on the Lavender flame! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/27/2006 |
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Symbolic and passionate; most compelling, Sage. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/27/2006 |
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Chuckling at Jenata's comments below !
This is an absolute firebrand of a write Sage that reaches the climatic yellow prism on the spectrum scale !
Bring on the Lavender Flame Master Poet and Alchemist
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/27/2006 |
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wonderful write, sage; you are absolutely amazing! BRAVA!!
((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Jena Ayro |
1/26/2006 |
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This brings such feelings
and images that its quite
ummmm, warm in hear and
the clocks tic, tic ticken
seems too slow
Compared to the pounding
and throbbing sounds, and a
wave of rampent thoughts, yes
their running now
Geez, clitorally felt, hot
hottest image, branding deep,
Wetness, actually the thoughts
are now moven into a blue movie
form
Oh, gosh, rideing the flame,
U'r lavender flame, knew shoulda
put on a nappy for this read,
My thoughts say U'v done the
branding, later, Sage |
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