Dakota Gold: Kawliga Ballou, Tumbleweeds & Rattlers
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Sage Sweetwater
Monday, May 22, 2006
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Cigar store Indian standing by the door,
fringed buckskin beaded breastplate overblouse,
Dakota Gold barefoot on the sand floor,
ropin' the rattler, outta the tumbleweeds
flies a sage grouse, hard-on, Dakota Gold's peach beads,
fringe-dripping crotch for Kawliga Ballou,
that Indian woman who shoots firebrand ammo
held in her trade-bead harness strapped around her black thong,
smoke clears from Kawliga Ballou's peyote, sage, and sweetgrass bong,
there is no part of Kawliga Ballou's canyon which Dakota Gold has not explored,
the first time she set eyes on Kawliga Ballou, she remembers Kawliga's words of few,
"A year scarcely suffices to see it all, you cannot see Kawliga Ballou in one view."
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
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| Reviewed by Thomas Garrett |
5/25/2006 |
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I've gotta get out West more often.
Sonny G |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/24/2006 |
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Excellent! I think you melted my glasses! Good on you~! LOL Very well done, Sage!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/24/2006 |
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| No indeedy... and can just imagine this like some kinda erotic, sexual Pandora's Box (oops!!) which eager hands and fingers just can't wait to trawl through, like Pirate Treasure. Rich and opulent with lush imagery of culture, fashion and scenery, this evokes mood and passion that rivals the heat of a tropical sun. No Blue Bayou here, Sage: this is positively scorchin! K xx |
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| Reviewed by Jena Ayro |
5/23/2006 |
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H......O......T
and dripping with
imagery of women
exploreing each
other
Really Nice (S C)
pictures and music |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
5/23/2006 |
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| Postively crackles. I loved the sound of this, Sage, and the imagery too. Good stuff! ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/23/2006 |
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| Sadly, I never saw her in Rapid city.. Funny I just done a cowboy poem.. Sounds like my kinda woman... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/23/2006 |
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Sage,
Beautiful imagery makes this poem come alive, stimulating ALL of the senses; delightful to read...and experience! Well done, my friend.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
5/23/2006 |
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I just rode into town and guess what I found? Blessed imagery raw, excited, hot, dusty, raunchy, so I went to the Saloon to calm down, had a few shots of redeye...pulled up a stool sat back relaxed and decided I like this place. The view would be worth staying for. Excellent Sage. Totally Rocks.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
5/23/2006 |
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OH yes, Kawliga Ballou is Dakota Gold.
I like this a lot. Great stuff! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/22/2006 |
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Better than Cat Ballou any day!;-) Dynamic bold poetry Sage!
eT |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
5/22/2006 |
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Sage...You paint a visual that is an old western legend restructured and adventurous with new age vixens and high walking creatures. I love your view of the raw west.
I'm a fan.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
5/22/2006 |
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| Some sexy (but tough) gals! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/22/2006 |
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| i luv how you suggest to the reader, images and themes that are both exciting, explorative and bold ... |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
5/22/2006 |
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Sage
Reminded me of a Marlon Brando psychological Western " One Eyed Jacks ".....
You always manage to transmit a powerful and metaphysical message in all your works, both cognitive and subliminal !
Love and Blessings
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/22/2006 |
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For some reason, this reminds me of "Cat Ballou."
I gotta say I love the whole presentation here: music, graphic image, verses. Quite the treat, Sage.
Thank you.
Love and peace,
Regis |
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