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Willow L. Jorden

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by Willow L. Jorden

Tuesday, August 08, 2006
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We must be open to the people we have relationships with.....we must be prepared to see two different sides to the same male/female

An Artist sees two
shades of green,
A Writer hears two
types of sounds

A Dancer sees two
steps to a song
A Singer sings two
different notes

A Muscian hears two
different melodies
To the same song
that torments his soul.

I see two of you
the lover and the friend
The muscian and the painter
that holds me tight

You've painted an image
you've sung your song
About who you are
and who you want to be

For this is you and that is me
and the four of us
A mutifaceted gem making up
the world together

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/10/2006
Nicely said.
Reviewed by atti? _ 8/8/2006
Although I truly loved the overall approach and concept of the piece, at times the format became very repetitive. While it seems you were clearly going for that, the pattern still would have been just as equally recieved if you didn't repeat it for every of the begining stanza's. That was just the begining though, once I hit the third I think it was, stanza, I really started to get into it. I really loved your concious sense of diction and syllable count... It made for a very clean and organized aesthetic, that allowed the content to really pop out. I liked this despite my complaints about the earlier stanzas. Good job man.
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett 8/8/2006
This is very well written and it is a true deep reality.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 8/8/2006
Willow

These are so many sides and facets to the multi faceted coin of human nature..

Terrific analytical poem

Peter
Reviewed by Sue Hess 8/8/2006
gee, i don't feel so bad about the other three people in my head...nice poem
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