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1.	Into Your Soul


2.	Gently unto me


3.	?What Is It?


4.	Lovers Of The Sea


5.	Lascivious Awareness


6.	A Poem Is Born


7.	G R A S S


8.	The Blade Of Truth


9.	Sundown in Thibodaux


10.	Dying Alive


11.	The Liar


12.	Constant Hope


13.	A Little Drop of Rain


14.	Are We Just Actors Saying Our Lines (Villa


15.	MY SOMETHING WICKED THIS WAY COMES

Walkabout by Rainbow Fish Friday, August 18, 2006 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
In the moment The Spirit sounded Ray of light Beamed down Piercing clouds Of darkness & fear Through to the core Where all light is swallowed Matter; space & time Sucked away Down To the darkness in my soul Incandescent lifeline Crackling with intent Streaked from the heavens To the depths Ripping through The pathway To darkness Taking hold Of the core To stop Poles Switched Inverted darkness As the black hole Imploded In my heart The slightest of breaths Whispers to the Music of the Spheres A hair�s breadth Of quiet Within Nothing �Fore the force Ripped through me Again Bursting out Flowing through Emanations Beams of beauty As my soul soars free Released in the limitless Light of Love The tears flow As I know I have found myself I was shown Before Veiled glimpses Beyond the veil Of intimacy The temple curtain Is rent All stands revealed As lights streams To all corners All planes Of existence Thunderous rapids Like a beacon In the night To show The way

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Reviewed by richard cederberg	8/19/2006

A metaphysical write glowing with the desires of a transcendant soul searching. All humans need to find The Way! Hopefully it will lead them to the LIGHT! Richard Lloyd Cederberg




Reviewed by jude forese	8/18/2006

Before Veiled glimpses Beyond the veil Of intimacy superb fluidity and expression of inspired and passionate thought ...




Reviewed by Marilyn Seray	8/18/2006

I agree with Elizabeth. the words just flowed as I recited this only to get to the end wanting more.




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	8/18/2006

Marvelous work. I like the way it tumbles down the page. Well done.




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	8/18/2006

I really am having a hard time in trying to read this poem. Perhaps it's the size of the fonts, or perhaps it's the colour of fonts that makes it difficult to read, or perhaps it's my own eyes or the color of my screen that makes it difficult for me to see. Wish I could read this and give you a proper comment... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sangie Angel :o)