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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
8/31/2011 |
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Love & wisodm true. What stuck out for me was;
Pull the child away
from feeding at the mule’s tail.
Give the baby food.
What a frank image.
Thank you,
Janna |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
7/24/2011 |
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| Aberjhani - This poem reflects not only your owm greatness of spirit and compassion but shows what a caring world mankind could create if only more shared these qualities. - David |
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| Reviewed by Clarence Prince |
6/13/2011 |
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| It's such a good thing: FAITH! As it can give strength to human's hope, which enhances life to continue its fights against doubts and stresses in today's world of little peace. "Let God be God" Blessings!!! |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
4/14/2008 |
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| Your poem my brother reaffirms we are spiritual being above all else we know and that we are connected to the universe where we are all attached for the greater good and design. When we learn to appreciate each day that we are granted in this brief physical existence we become prayer and life and death are one but most of all eternal. When the Creator gave your spirit a body He gave more hope to the world. Peace!!! |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
8/30/2006 |
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The painting is an inspiration in itself.
The poetry is like a book of inspiring quotes, all from Aberjhani.
I think I like #2, the first 3 lines of #1, and the healing counsel of "write a soft poem to..." in #3. Forgive me for dissecting your work, it contains so many good thoughts!
Connie |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
8/28/2006 |
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oh inspirational and uplifting, very meaningful, love the art to A
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
8/28/2006 |
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I love the power in the commanding statements (section 3), the beautiful affirmations, the weeping, the "in-you-face" attention from everything human that commissions us to behave like the Divine.
I'm so glad I took the time to read this after studying the news texts about Comair flight 5191 which saddens my heart, but strenghthens my commitment to make the most of this frail fleshly life by giving even more of myself away to others. We don't have to be old to be swept away, and God's timing is a wakeup call for everything that happens in this world to us is a lesson for those of us who remain.
blessin's, you need to be in the Hall of Poet Fame (if there ain't one there should be. . .and you'd be a stellar contender Brotha Aberjani.)
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
8/27/2006 |
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Exceptional piece, Aberjhani. I especially like this:
"Dare to love yourself
as if you were a rainbow
with gold at both ends."
Excellent work.
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
8/27/2006 |
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Aberjhani,
This is a gorgeous affirmation! It is so easy to get lost in the day-to-day 3D funk and inertia. This motivates the soul to reach for higher ground! |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
8/27/2006 |
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"Dare to love yourself
as if you were a rainbow
with gold at both ends." is just one of my favorite passages.
as is "
Live certain days dressed
in your lover’s smiling soul
while she, he, wears yours." but then, I love them all. Thank
you for all you do, and have done {and will}, to promote peace,
equality, understanding, and compassion. Always, and Then, Bro, Always, and Then 'Pea' <3
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/27/2006 |
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Lessons in life proferred. Will a soft poem blunt the bullet of a 9mm through the head?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/26/2006 |
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| I hear ya' Aberjhani ~ Your words speak true and clear! I have enjoyed reading your heartfelt deep write, your words take flight through the air. Love, BRIGHT Light, and Warm HuGs! Warmly, Illuminating,*She* P.s. I will be back, I find myself drawn in to your writing style within ~ |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/26/2006 |
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| This should be an inspiration to us all. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/26/2006 |
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Aberjhani,
Beautiful inspiration in verse makes the spirit soar; thank you, you touch my soul with divine love. Bless you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/25/2006 |
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This is so beautifully meaningful, Aberjhani. Thank you for sharing this inspiring gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/25/2006 |
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Truly beautiful and an inspiration to those
who think they have problems. Love is the answser. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/25/2006 |
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Hope deferred makes the heart sick, but when the desire comes, it is a tree of life.
A wise exhortation, Poet Aberjhani, to view ones surroundings and enemies through the eyes of love and forgiveness. Releasing oneself from the mental and emotional shackles that invariably imprison the soul, will always liberate the heart and mind to soar above the clouds.
The view of Eagles transcends the view from behind the mules tail.
I salute you Poet. Angel of Healing: for the Living, the Dying, and the Praying, has cooled my heart with the pure waters of wisdom.
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/24/2006 |
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Thank you...for sharing your heart and soul..that poured into this one!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/24/2006 |
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Beautiful write, Aberjhani; what more can I say?? Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Keep Karla and I in prayer; we are struggling financially with no end in sight unless a Miracle occurs....Thanks! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
8/24/2006 |
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Aberjhani
A brilliant and exotic write, that is interspersed with acute insight and vision..
Your quill is on fire..
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/24/2006 |
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| My joy grew as I read each line here, Aberjhani. Marvelous Poem - and Artwork. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/24/2006 |
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This composition is like three trays of ambrosias placed on Minerva's table to please Herself and guests ~ Phoebus and Erato.
"Angel of Healing: for the Living, the Dying, and the Praying" has fed my mind and nourished my soul.
I salute You, Poet.
Long healthy life through a blissful living.
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
8/24/2006 |
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| BRAVO!!! no other words needed.! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
8/24/2006 |
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Inspirational wings indeed, if more people could free their minds and wake from the dream we call 'reality', we would see who we really are and what we can become.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
8/24/2006 |
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I would simply like to say that a person doesn't know what they can do until Aberjhani inspires them! For when the Aberjhani impulse stirs, you realize the healing wisdom has been right here all along...thank you, Aberjhani for turning positive force and motivating...
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/24/2006 |
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| ... and it all starts with that first "Good Morning, Lord!" And fresh as a brand new sunrise are these inspired thoughts that seek to oil the wheels of passage through birth, death and beyond. Both dawn and dusk bring with them their messages of hope for those who cast their gaze upwards and outwards. They know how to find bread to bless others. ADORE the gorgeous yawning stretch of that last stanza. Piquant. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader) |
8/23/2006 |
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I always adore your MASTERPIECES..I look forward to reading more..God, the talent you have dear one!!!!!!!!
Love & Light, Dove |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/23/2006 |
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| inspired truisms of heart and soul build into a crescendo truth and wisdom ... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
8/23/2006 |
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"...Imagine your mind
wings intent on expanding
and watch your joy fly..."
Winds it all up beautifully. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
8/23/2006 |
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If everyone who reads this will exercise the wisdom within your pen then they will be richer for it and will grow with confidence. You have a medicinal way of easing a person down with wisdom they can actually digest.
Most excellent Aberjahni.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/23/2006 |
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A glorious poem of inspired wisdom. Full of compassion and wise suggestions, we would all do well to heed. Beautiful Aberjhani to match the splemdid art!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels |
8/23/2006 |
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| exceptional work, enjoyed what you had to say..... |
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