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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
10/9/2007 |
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| You captured the essence in only a few short words - well done! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/6/2007 |
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| very good imagerey |
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| Reviewed by Patrice Bunge (Reader) |
4/11/2007 |
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| I love the image of riding a nightmare. I've been reading online articles about dreams, and some theorize that we are able to control them. I just finished a dream poem and now am starting an acrostic poem, Nightmare, and was googling for ideas. That's how I came to yours. I like your poem the way it is, but I can also see lots of potential. Here's an idea: take your nightmare on a journey--where are you going? You could even do a series. Best Wishes! Patrice |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/14/2006 |
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| captures the intensity quite nicely, Adelle ... |
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
11/14/2006 |
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Mastering the dark with words-yeah!
~D. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
11/11/2006 |
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A nightmare that you portrayed extremely well. Great visuals.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
11/11/2006 |
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Wow...
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Zahala San Simone |
11/11/2006 |
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Whew--sounds like some nightmare. Enjoyed the write,
Wendi |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
11/11/2006 |
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Sounds like some of my nightmares, Adelle. Well described here!
Warmest regards,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/11/2006 |
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Been there done that....had a few nightmares myself, some that I had to hold on tight, one or two that became a reality and had to hold on even tighter. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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