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| Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler |
4/10/2011 |
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Insightful ending. I'm glad it's Spring these days.
Tom |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
7/18/2010 |
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| Great picture and the poem complements it nicely. Ahhh, but spring is a wonderful time of year. |
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| Reviewed by Tony May Sr. |
5/19/2010 |
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Thank you Donna, for the imagery and visuals that you presented and those I embrace having heard or read your work. I love communication,and now to have a chance to visit another authors page and see what they see, feel what they feel is a welcomed experience. Thank you for the invitation.
It goes without saying ( and also it stands to reason that I must therefore say it) while the statement is not proper to say or even further more that this is not the proper place to say it, but you too are beautiful, and so intelligent (which is exciting to discover what the mind can comprehend, articulate and ultimately achieve) excuse me now, I have to read another write. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
11/13/2008 |
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| Gorgeous with visuals that delight the senses! Your opening line is grand and one can pause there and need go no further, if wanted, but you draw your reader in with your first sentence so beautifully. What a captivating line! Most enjoyable! Best always, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Judith Pleasant |
10/7/2008 |
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Thanks for the review Donna.
Very interesting poem. Good write.
I just wrote one about fall has just begun and I'm waiting for Spring already.
Your poem has given me more antisipation of Spring fever.
Blessings,
Judith |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
2/28/2008 |
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This is a beautiful tribute to Spring. Thanks, Donna!
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/28/2008 |
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| A visual feast for the eyes! If I thought I had spring fever before...I'm suffering from it even more now! |
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| Reviewed by Willie Maartens |
6/1/2007 |
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| Lovely work! Best wishes. Willie |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/19/2007 |
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A Beautiful Ode to Spring!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by J M |
4/18/2007 |
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So beautiful the visuals in this poem come alive in your penmanship.
A Blessing,
Josie |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/18/2007 |
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| Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/17/2007 |
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| Am I going bonkers or did I read this yesterday? lol BONKERS I know... like the ambiguity of the penn..Nice work.. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/17/2007 |
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Such a pretty bird! Isnt't Spring wonderful? Arenewal of mother earth. Enjoyed this piece.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/17/2007 |
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spring is indeed a time for propagation ... strange, how we humans ruffle each other's feathers in places like malls, bars and street corners but then again the bounty of nature is so far away what else can we do? ...
uniquely penned spring ode ... |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/17/2007 |
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Love the way you send snapshots of both man and wildlife shooting across cyber space to give us a sense of renewed spring energy. Very good lines in this one.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
4/17/2007 |
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| great picture to save. Yes, many up north who have hibernated through the winter will start the outside work to work off the winter coating. Soon we'll have blue birds too! Lady J |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
4/17/2007 |
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A lovely springlike poem -- I wish it would finally come to New Hampshire. Looking outside, it's still raining and the nasty Nor'easter is still upon us here. Ahhh spring, where art thou?
Love,
CJ |
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