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Nemesis
by jeff potter

Friday, May 04, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Nemesis is the goddess of retribution, mess around with love and the penalty is high x



Round black bottomless hole shredding my life devouring my soul sucking me dry leaving me lost remembering moments counting the cost

Darkness; grey swirling mists, gunmetal skies, nemesis: All for love yet love is lost remembering moments counting the cost

Anger outrage grief unfair! you drained the chalice left...despair. Without a care you drank me dry and left me bitter tears to cry. Remembering moments counting the cost deep within I feel the loss

Deep within a bottomless pit deceit despair punishment...fit. A punishment that fits the crime a penal servitude sublime. Remembering moments knowing the cost at one with grief I bear the loss

Pale blue azure skies I now perceive through tear blinded eyes the tears that wept the clouds away have brought respite have somehow paved the road to loves warm balmy heights

Remembering moments counting the cost my one dark cloud my fear of loss
 


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Reviewed by Tactfully Naive 5/7/2007
Azure is a serene colour. The storm clouds have dispersed. Yet there appears to be a rumbling in the distant memory, a threatening thunderstorm. Are those dark clouds of yesteryear gathering? Are they being summoned by Nemesis?
Play about with love? Sounds like someone is still walking across a lake covered in ice.

Evocative

Regards
Daibhidh

Reviewed by H Cruz 5/4/2007
Sounds like therapy to me pal, cheer up there are plenty cave women worth clubbing!
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