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| Reviewed by John Domino |
12/12/2008 |
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| Yes, very well said! Walking along the ocean shore. It is one of my favorite things to do... |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/19/2008 |
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| The ocean revives me and takes all my problems away. It brings back why we are here and wondering what is on the other side. More people distraught and asking for help. I cannot comprehend how wide a world it is when I see the huge ocean. My mind does wander at the ocean and floats freely to a land unknown where I'd like to be. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
1/9/2008 |
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| Bravo~`* Exxcellent write! |
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| Reviewed by angelina neves |
5/26/2007 |
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| wonderful! (...For me, if the universe come to created our mind and inteligence it is because it needs them to fill it in some way! And for me, the gods are just a creation of our human mind! So our mind is the most precious and mystirous of the universe creation and we don't even know how to use it properly!) |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Mercer |
5/15/2007 |
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| Profound and compelling poem. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/10/2007 |
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To ponder what is, what is not. Truely an interesting write.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
5/10/2007 |
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| A beautiful inspirational write...visual images are great, the voice clear and wondering, flows good. I enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/10/2007 |
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| Beautiful to contemplate such a miraculous night. Lovely poem. |
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