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| Reviewed by Jansen Estrup |
2/23/2013 |
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| The precise circumstances may not apply to you, but on some elemental level this work is about you, and the rest of us, too. Thank you for the powerful piece. |
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Little Flower |
11/21/2011 |
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| You got that right - Lady!!!!!!!!!That is not Love |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
10/31/2008 |
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A strong and powerful poem you have written.You are a very talented writer,keep up the good work,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/12/2008 |
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Pier,
A very poignant, puissant piece of writing . . . top-notch!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
7/1/2007 |
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This exudes power derived from heartache...
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
6/8/2007 |
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This was powerful. Yes, stand up for yourself! Wonderful write!
Sandie May Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/1/2007 |
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Powerfully self-empowering and you make a most worthy statement, Pier. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/27/2007 |
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yeah yeah an eye for an eye
get your fight on....but really sometimes that is the only way to get a person to see their faults by giving it to em' right in the kisser
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
5/27/2007 |
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| well put and powerful! thanks for sharing |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/26/2007 |
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Say hello to my fist.....now that ain't such a bad thought...only if my fist coul be powerful enough...I need a PAN!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
5/26/2007 |
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Some might view your verse as a tough stand, Pier. But any person who would even consider ill treatment of another is not involved in a loving relationship. Love doesn't mistreat, it cherishes. Love doesn't direct and tell another person what they should or shouldn't do or what they can or can't say. Love accepts and cherishes the other person for their honest self. Anything less is unacceptable, unloving and ungodly.
Does the 20-year-old "key" the paint job on his new car? Of course not. He/she is out cleaning and polishing and "nuturing" the car with the most tender care and pride possible.
So, if you don't feel cherished--no matter what view the other person voices or thinks of their own conduct--get out of there!
Anything less is lying to yourself and accepting far less than any human deserves: Cherished, loving companionship.
Way ta go, Pier. Maybe those doubting themselves will now get the courage to "stand up" and be honest with themselves.
And if you, Reader, are one of those, you don't have to go it alone. There are organizations and governmental agencies that will step in and help you make the change into the life God intended for you.
If that's you, make your actions live Pier's words: "Say hello to my fist!"
Richard |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/26/2007 |
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| wow tough stuff versing Pier but I loved it, rockem sockem |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/26/2007 |
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It is such a tragedy when people resort to violence instead of understanding and communication. No one is the property of another and no one deserves to be beaten because they are following a life path that differs from another's expectations. With our inability to resolve our one-on-one relationships without resorting to violence I wonder how people can believe that whole countries with such diverse viewpoints can ever live in harmony. Your words are powerful, Pier and strong. Excellent poetry.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Mercer |
5/26/2007 |
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| Wow! potent, powerful poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/26/2007 |
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| Gulp. If ever I'm in your area, Don't look me up..lol |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/25/2007 |
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| Excellent writing,Hugsssssssssssss |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/25/2007 |
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Too many men and women abuse one
or the other.
Terrific write Pier... |
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