|Reviewed by Glen Manese
|A Place Called Happy, you've invoke a lot in the lines... the reader is consumed by the struggles by which the little girl is going through... Thanks for sharing...|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Happy New Year To YOU and Yours. I see you have not lost your skill. I think you submitted a great writing.
|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|Moving, shared from the heart. Someone to show the way... That lingers.
((LOve ya)) ~yourDreamyGal
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Sad but true to so many!
Heartfully touching and happiness will arrive!
P.S. No music played SC!
WArmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|The little girl deserves more than happiness in my book...even more than ecstasy if that were possible. A heart that hungers shall be fulfilled.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Your poem makes me sad. I believe that happiness is what we make of life - lemons or lemonade. Yet, it is difficult for some to find happiness when life around them is full of pain. I hope your 'little girl' finds happiness, soon.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I suppose there are many like her in
this wicked old world.
All she wants is to be wanted.
Love ya SC
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Very well penned poem about a search for happiness.
Hey, just remember...God made them Isrealite folks wander around in the desert for forty years.....Love you Sissy,
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Give her a big hug and tell her it's going to be alright, Ok Sweets ;)
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Sc I said it before and I repeat it now, happiness is there for all of us, we are just blind to it, open your eyes wider and spread that smile, so it can welcome you. You are special.
newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Big (((Hugs & Kisses))) to that poor little girl. Such a sad heart breaking write my friend. Bless You Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|I have left bread crumbs all the way to happiness, just follow the trail.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|A lot of lonely girls grow up to be feisty big girls..Somehow finding happiness from within. Very beautiful poem SC
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awwwww, the poor sweet, precious little girl. In search of something that is just out of reach, reminds me of the little match stick girl. Powerful piece, filled with emotion....
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|SC, we all want just a little bit,hope your's is on the way,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Breathes sadness with just a gasp of hope. Like the honesty of this write...
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|Well, you stepped into my head and wrote how I feel.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
No Fool such as I am....I have climb mountains...swam rivers...and fighted many demons........but this one is killing me slowly that I am fighting right now.....cold are me fingers......and the grip I need to strangle just not powerful enough!!
Happy does not like to be by my side...always avoiding that very last step to happiness!!