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Burrowing: Scrabble Squabble Part IV
by Leo Durrant
Friday, November 30, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
The Scrabble Wars continue. Your play, Charlie. You can use the last two lines. I tried to end it with something a little more usable, but this was the best. So, for the sake of the poem, you get "un-nesting." Sorry for the inconvenience. But not really. |
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you taught me to fly
and never land
(neither a burrower
nor a lander be)
but still,
I burrow
into your warmth
under that all-protective wing
ear pressed into
the downy heart of love
nestled
nested
blissfully
I bathe in your song
while I fear the un-nesting |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/8/2008 |
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I fear the un-nesting as much as I fear the unraveling...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by blue soplain |
12/1/2007 |
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en garde- --
clever.ly quipped and quilled as well. ..
i love this epic.becoming stratego battle. ..
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
11/30/2007 |
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| You've got me stumped--I admit it. But check out Crystal's poem on my site--not bad either. Now I've got to try to incorporate her and your last lines--and I thought she was on my side!!! You guys are cleaver--very cleaver--you've hacked my heart to bitZ!!! It's okay. I mean, don't feel guilting or anything. I'll get over it...eventually.... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/30/2007 |
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| very clever! |
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| Reviewed by William Cryer |
11/30/2007 |
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he! such verbose, protracted imbroglio! but the chortles!
--and Leo brandishes his razor-edged poignard--his wit--and strikes yet again! Will this leave Charlie defeated and humbled? The anticipation is unbearable! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/30/2007 |
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Oh, ho, using an innocnet animal to try to shake Charlie's compassion...oh, boy, can't wait for the response! This is brilliant, Leo, a move I wasn't expecting. If this was chess, I'd say "Check." LOL Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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