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The Night Crawler
by Claira Jo

Monday, January 07, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

Here's a little peom I drafted one night when I couldn't sleep. I stayed awake watching the moon as I penned it.

Enjoy

CJ
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The Night Crawler 

 

 

He hides in the shadows, till dark of night falls,

While lying and waiting, his thirst for blood calls,

A victim draws near, unaware of his hiding,

His taste buds start tingling, his jaws start a-widening,

 

Her clip-clopping feet pound the wet cobbled street,

Still closer she gets and so does the meat,

Her sweet smelling perfume caresses his being,

Already he tastes her young flesh, so appealing

 

He drools at the mouth like a wild rabid dog,

She'll wish she'd stayed home, safe out of the fog,

His victim he sees, at the end of the lane,

Quickly he hides and raises his cane, 

 

She turns the last corner and stops at his side,

She pulls out her phone and checks on her ride,

The taxi she'd booked will be out at the gates,

Her boyfriend she speaks to, while she awaits,

 

The stalker then crawls back into his tomb,

Then patiently waits for a victim to loom,

Soon she'll appear and he'll jump on her back,

Then whack with his cane and devour his snack!

 

 

© Copyright Claira Jo 2007 
 

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Reviewed by Ed J. 1/17/2008
Very well done! You convey well the social environ ment of the day and the realism of dangers.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed
Reviewed by GL Douglas 1/11/2008
Oh, my gosh, Claira, I almost felt like it was me who was unknowingly moving toward danger!!! Great job of keeping the pace on track and with your delightful, engaging, word choices. Glad I avoided the stalker!!! heee
G.L. Douglas
Author of Alpha Rising
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/9/2008
Nicely done, Claira Jo. I appreciate your attention to rhyme and rhythm which make the poem flow smoothly. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 1/8/2008
That's creepy and delightfully wicked...and fun to read!

I like the impression of ancient evil lurking opposite the modern aspects of phone and car...

Well done.
Gina
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/7/2008
Tale of intrigue and suspense so very well done...

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Darcy Busch 1/7/2008
I really enjoyed The Night Crawler. You are a very talented writer. I wish you all the best with everything you do.
Darcy
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/7/2008
C.J.,

I love the rhyme and flow of your poem. That night crawler seems like a sure cure for for what ails. (lol). Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
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