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DOT COM by Edwin Hurdle Monday, June 02, 2008 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan If you are commenting on this poem and if it says "You've previously left a message",you can email me your feedback which is always appreciated
"DOT COM" I don't have to type on a keyboard The website of my life works very well. It operates properly with you being a part of it. The page runs with 100% completion. Without you,it can't function right Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me I don't call technical support for assistance Your love is all the support I need 24/7 Always on my side like Nationwide Insurance. Hand in Hand,Shoulder by Shoulder You're the greatest sidekick of them all. Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me. I'm bless that you're a part of my existence A connection that keeps going strong. Grateful to know that you're always there. I can count on you cause you're simply #1 Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me Copyright(c) 2009 by Edwin Hurdle
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Reviewed by Leanna McNabb	4/2/2010

Very creatively interesting!




Reviewed by Ahmad Saqer	8/16/2009

nice poem Edwin thnx for sharing




Reviewed by Douglas Bentley	7/9/2009

Very good - enjoyed Doug




Reviewed by Inspire Hope	7/9/2009

Edwin I find " DOT COM " Very interesting, and encouraging! An excellent read Edwin, may the Lord always bless you in all that you put your hands to do. P.S. Sorry for taking so long to visit you Edwin, I will be back real soon! Love And Prayers Always!




Reviewed by Dale Clark	7/9/2009

I like this Edwin, fine piece and concept.




Reviewed by Joyce Bell	7/9/2009

UNIQUE LOVE CONCEPT WITH A REPETITIVE THEME THAT HOLDS YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY TOGETHER NICELY. ENJOYED. BLESSING AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS




Reviewed by M Flack	7/9/2009

God, online 24/7 through the mystery of the Holy Spirit Broadband :o) Great poem. Thanks for sharing...




Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)	7/8/2009

Excellent, and very clever I might add!Holly




Reviewed by Ruhi Sonal	7/6/2009

brilliant poem... really enjoyed it.




Reviewed by DELETE ACCOUNT	7/6/2009

excelent




Reviewed by Nicole Weaver	7/5/2009

Edwin, Very clever indeed! You certainly have a way with words. Nicole




Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green	7/1/2009

How clever and romantic!! B r a v o, Edwin Hurdle, B R A V O !!




Reviewed by L. Figgins	6/30/2009

I can hear the music, Edward! Wonderful rhythm, analogy and sentiment. "Never...in front...in back of...above me." The only way to be... Lin




Reviewed by Lew Duffey	6/28/2009

I enjoyed this but I replaced Dot com with J C... Jesus Christ and through him, GOD! Great write, indeed. God bless, Lew




Reviewed by lili dauphin	6/9/2009

Very interesting. Like it.




Reviewed by William Bonilla	6/7/2009

An excellent write Edwin Very creative and enjoyable reading Peace be with you William




Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)	6/6/2009

Enjoyed reading your poem and thank you Edwin for the warm welcome to AD. Legacy




Reviewed by Brandi Wroblewski	6/6/2009

Thanks for commenting on my poem :) I like this, it's a style I don't use but I deffinitely should give it a try so you've inspired, impressed, and taught me thanks!




Reviewed by Carol Grace	6/6/2009

What a great idea for a poem. I really like the second line. Look forward to reading more.




Reviewed by Natasha Head	6/5/2009

I am hoping you have a tune set to this one! Definately catchy. I enjoy how you take what we work with everyday and turn it into poetry. Anyone seeking inspiration can find it easily in a piece such as this.