Nothing I could do
by Pamela L garner
Saturday, September 20, 2008
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Years have passed since are paths have crossed
But the memories never got lost
Though all this time
You've stayed in this heart of mine
Today I saw you once more
It wasn't the some as before
You seemed more solemon and afraid
Not the free sprirt the once came to my aid
Your joyous ways disappeared
As if you lived in fear
I was sad for you
But knew there was nothing I could do
You choose your path and it was to never speak to me again
So I say I'm sorry my friend
I wish I could help you through
I simply regret that there is nothing I can do
Years have passed and you turn away
I simply keep my old feelings at bay..
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|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|One of the challenges of life is accepting that life is not fair. Some things we get that we don't deserve and other things we have earned are never shared.
Dear Pamela--and others--I invite you to visit my den site to enjoy my posting of the Article slideshow: "Lebensweisheiten." (Wisdoms of Life)
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a very good poem,take care
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can relate to what you express in these verses, Pamela. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|I like this, Pam. It is easy flowing, and easy to follow. There is emotional feelings here that pour out to the reader, and the images I see here are ones of looking into his face once more and seeing his gaunt expression of fear and sadeness. That is what I get from this, and of course if someone decides not to speak to us again, what can we do? What are we supposed to do? Nothing, because if someone decided not to speak to me again, I would simply ignore them. It took me many years to relaize this, because my sisters have decided not to speak to me, or have me in their lives.
You wrote this one very well, Pam. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie