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Books
• The Best Of Boggart Blog (vol 1)

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• Millennium Dawn (anthology)

• A Stroke of Luck


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• Psycho Benefit Fraud

• The Vegetarian Shoemaker Of Barking

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• Garry Trotter and the Portal of Pleasure #3 (Adult Humour)

• The King of the Ribble Delta Blues Singers (humour)

• A Stroke of Luck - Chapter 19

• A Stroke of Luck - Chapter 18

• A Stroke of Luck - Chapter 17

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• A Stroke of Luck - Chapter 15


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• Italian Vampire's Grave Discovered

• Stone Throwing Chimp Shocks Scientists

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• The flame still Burns Tribute to Robert Burns)


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• Where Did All The Money Go

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• From The Darkness : Vernal Equinox

• Danny Boyle: A Song For Oscar

• Graduation Blues

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Chasing Bubbles
by Ian R Thorpe
Saturday, October 11, 2008
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I wonder if I am first off the blocks with a poem about the meltdown in the financial markets?

This is also a lyric, the music being developed by my songwriting at the moment. The italicised lines will form the chorus.


 

 I was hooked by a whore in a velvet beret
her accent was phoney as sincerity;
we drank pink champagne
as the world went insane
and traders made bargains in fantasy;

 

 

There was no point resisting, what could I say,
all things are for sale when someone will buy.
To ease my confusion
she said I offer illusion
in a place where love’s just a commodity.

It seemed she was teaching me life is a play
and each new scene is a business transaction
so I should make the trade
join the sad masquerade
and not let my principles prove a distraction.

I asked her if dawn might convince her to stay:
she said "you thought love might be part of the deal?"
Love is a promise
made by the dishonest
I’m a whore not a fraud, what ought I to feel?

Around us the city festered like a wound,
lies and deceptions were spreading like plague;
reality dissolved
as the great wheel revolved
and suddenly all I once believed in seemed vague.

Now I’m with the whore in the velvet beret
who knew money always screams louder than truth,
we were blind to the troubles
as we chased after bubbles.
We bought the big lie without asking for proof.
 

 

 

 

we talked and danced, I could not walk away
entranced, I advanced through the game.
knowing that life would, could not be the same
if I lay with the whore in the velvet beret

 Show me the tax haven - satire at Boggart Blog


Little Nicky Machiavelli - Magic Money


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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) 8/20/2009
Call me Bubbles Darling, everybody does!!! lol
Reviewed by L. Figgins 4/17/2009
No, my poem "Ghost Among The Evergreens" was about this subject, though I guess I should have categorized it as such or I was too vague, or both. Would like your opinion, Ian.

Dynamite write! I like the analogy you used here, "...I was hooked by a whore in a velvet beret". The whores are those selling us a promise based, as you have illustrated, on illusion. All for gain. Glad I stumbled onto your den. Regards...Lin
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/11/2008
the first i have seen--and so well done


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