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falling apart......letter of goodbye by Janice Sandrino Tuesday, November 11, 2008 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan my hardest pains are the words i cannot say....

maybe it wasn't our time. but the love we have then, ...i know its real,,,i feel its real... i was glad for having you in my life, ...got no regrets at all... the love will always be there... its just that...it changes phase... would wish to see you...someday i hope you'll live a happy life and that in any way,,, that i have hurt your feelings,,, i'd hope someday you'll learn to forgive me,,, and all my shortcomings... i will surely miss what we had before,,, it will not be that easy... take care of yourself...always... I'll miss you... by:dada

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Reviewed by Michelle Mead	11/12/2008

Felt this deep, moving.




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	11/12/2008

Sadness of leaving one life behind to begin anew. Challenges to be faced and conquered, well said, though bittersweet... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	11/12/2008

I enjoy reading this poem,it was heartfelt and fill with deep compassion along with the power of moving on.take good care of yourself and hopefully I'll read more of your poetry in the near future :-) Edwin




Reviewed by E. Richardson	11/11/2008

with or without a musical score, this piece does indeed touch. Nicely done, good rhythm, very poignant presentation. Keep up the good work and welcome to the Den.




Reviewed by Daring Sunshine	11/11/2008

That's the hardest thing to say. Heartfelt and hope you melody touches many. Good luck. Grace&Peace, Sharon




Reviewed by Janice Sandrino	11/11/2008

its hard to say it...so i wrote it one night.... now im trying to put a little melody to it...everysong is a poem....