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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
10/3/2012 |
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| Certainly a heartfelt poem from an emotional poet and writer. Well done my friend. You never disappoint with your words for they speak to us in volumes... and move us in many ways... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/7/2010 |
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A HONEST SHARING OF THE PAIN OF HEARTBREAK. DONE SO WELL...WITH CLEAR IMAGING. ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
12/15/2009 |
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Interesting! profound and heartfelt! Yet God is a Healer, and He is a Keeper I can relate to this Regis. Powerful write thank you for sharing please do not stop caring! May the Lord strengthen you!
Much Love,
Always!!!
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
8/25/2009 |
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| Tremendously powerful and beautiful poem Regis. I can feel the emotion in every word, every line. Walking on the edge. I know this well. I wrote a poem called "Sleeping Tide" which touches on some of these themes, like life on the edge. We keep doing this Regis. Must be something in the poetic heart. |
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| Reviewed by Acirè C |
7/23/2009 |
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Wow
You must have fallen for the girl hard lol.
Acirè C |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
6/30/2009 |
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Regis,
I look forward to reading your poems. This one is to the point! You have done it again. Good use of words.
Regards,
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
6/22/2009 |
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| Raw emotions resound in this piece, Reg ... so painful, it clutches at the heart. Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson |
6/7/2009 |
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| A true chorus from the heart on trials of love. |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
5/24/2009 |
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| Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Donna DeLong Matthews |
5/23/2009 |
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This I can so relate to ... Sounds like you didnt miss heaven by much either. This was so thought provoke'n written. You have a way of taking your reader right along your path. Enjoyed very much
Thank you so much for your more than kind comments
you have left behind...
Hugs
Donna
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| Reviewed by Mystic Rayne |
5/14/2009 |
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| I loved the imagery you used in this - beautifully done |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/13/2009 |
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Very powerful poem.
cheers
milton |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
3/23/2009 |
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Regis beautiful and sad all in one.
Such an emotionally packed "After We Talked"
If love is meant love will be.
Continued blessings to you and your wonderful works,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
3/13/2009 |
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| Intensity, vulnerability, brilliant. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
3/3/2009 |
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| great expression of intensity, Regis! |
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| Reviewed by Anna Glymph |
3/3/2009 |
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| Wow I felt your emotion......if it is meant to be you will reconcile |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/3/2009 |
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| Deep and very intense. I feel your pain! May Gods hand help to heal your heart.....M |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
2/27/2009 |
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| The verse of love in pain of separation, so very well done here to capture the words. |
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| Reviewed by M Flack |
2/26/2009 |
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The pain of lost love can be healed with the touch of new love...
wandered about
I met a genuine damsel
Girl with ebon hair
And purple shining
Eyes gleaming darkly
Black pearls
Beyond beauty
Looking at her
I could barely breathe
Her everlasting entity
Maybe even in love, when one door closes another one opens. We just need to be ready to walk through it when it does...
Well done as always... |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/25/2009 |
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Achingly painful, you paint a portrait of heartache that I have known. The unraveling of the heartstrings can be painful, but ultimately, it becomes liberating.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
2/24/2009 |
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Boy of all the AD poets I've read you really capture the "perils" of love, its expectations, its unrequited possibilities, its bottomless joys and soaring griefs. Your style is so suited to it... Hey, read your new bio, who's the "new" lovely lady on your arm? Wonderful! And where can I find out more about "Autumn Leaves" (?) is it a book, ezine or journal?
Next time, michael |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
2/24/2009 |
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Deep painful emotions throughout these lines
Love is kind, sweet but
When they breaks your heart
Love truly hurts
Regis give your heart time to heal
And take care
I agree with Romantic Poetess she is
She is a Sultrily beauty
Sending you Peace Love and Light and Hugsss..Yolie
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| Reviewed by Pamela garner |
2/23/2009 |
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| love can be like a double edge sword. one one side it is sweet& beautiful and the other it is painful &hurtful. thanks for sharing. peace &love Pamela |
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| Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk |
2/22/2009 |
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Regis,
What a beautiful expression of love. Your girl is lovely Regis.
Mariann
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/22/2009 |
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As stunning as she is...
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/22/2009 |
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| love, sometimes it requires the tenacity of an English bulldog -- blended with the tenderness of a silken touch -- this is an emotionally rich poem Reg -- you have made it so easy for us to relate to the ecstasy and agony of such moments -- an excellent piece of art my dear friend -- much peace and love to you -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Juliet Waldron |
2/21/2009 |
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| Sounds like one of those "bloody" Valentines -- doesn't sound happy -- but thanks for transmuting the pain. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
2/21/2009 |
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Regis,
I can feel the depth of these emotions. Love can impale in more than one way. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/20/2009 |
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WEll, this sure ain't funny!
A great poem, with a sad message my sweet kind friend!
My heart hurts for your pain, but don't let it WIN!
Your stronger than this my sweet friend! Great picture to express these tough emotions!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExoooo
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
2/19/2009 |
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Aaaaawwwww!!!! Don't feel so bad!!! Regis, you are a wonderful person, and you will meet someone nice very soon.
A great sense of disappointment and sadness in this write.
Sandie Angel :( |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
2/19/2009 |
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Your Words of Emotions Are Inspiring Regis
those temptations we crave of love’s touch
oh….the invigorating sweet erotic quest
steadfast we dance like sensual passions
gleaming upon the concurs of euphoric unity
yet charted only by the goddess of decisions…
From the gracile flights of our desires yearning
we fall from the sky when our wings are removed
the descent is indeed a torrent pain
regressing within our hearts….
Much Love & Inspirations Regis
This Woman Is Sultrily Gorgeous!!!
Vickie {{hugzzz}}
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/18/2009 |
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Sometimes love is like that...and love only hurts because we care.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
2/18/2009 |
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Reg.. I feel so much pain as I read this...but all happens for a reason and we have to trust in God...it will be ok...I promise.
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/18/2009 |
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Love sometimes hurt
Peace be with you
William
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| Reviewed by Sheri Hoff |
2/18/2009 |
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Regis,
Love is torture at times -even in the best relationships. I wish I could erase the pain-touching poem-I can feel your emotion. Sheri |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/18/2009 |
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Powerful and emotional poem,very well written.Take care and stay strong.
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
2/17/2009 |
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Emotional garbage to be taken out in a 39-gallon lawn and garden black bag and mourned...Don't let the beauty of the spring flowers be trampled by these dark emotions, Reg...mulch and recycle beauty...sweets to you...
Love,
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
2/17/2009 |
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What is wrong with the woman?? Judgement's po', fo' sho'~!
Couldn'a been Ms. Right, but. . .she's right around the corner, you'll see! Love your honesty and passion. Illustration you chose is perfect!! Luv ya! Phyllis
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
2/17/2009 |
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Love - ain't she a bitch? Hope you'll come out of this in one piece.
Love,
Becca~ |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/17/2009 |
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Love isn't always easy...and its loss is heartbreaking, but still we try
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Mullan |
2/17/2009 |
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| It's sad to know the bad times, but then how would we appreciate the good ones? Thank you for sharing, DL Mullan |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
2/17/2009 |
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Sometimes the pain is unbearable and yet we live.
hugs
Kathie |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
2/17/2009 |
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I'm also concur with Felix...a little mixed as to who this is dirrected but i felt ..the pain, the pain,that was decisive and a feeling I wish on no one,
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
2/17/2009 |
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Regis,
(((( Regis )))
I hope soon the sun will shine for you once again.
Blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
2/17/2009 |
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| It's not always a bed of roses being in love. The other person has power over you and that hurts, especially if you have an independent streak. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
2/17/2009 |
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A wonderful write that shows one has excepted that there is true love and what is meant to be just a friendship. Thank you for sharing Regis.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
2/17/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Larson |
2/17/2009 |
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| Sadness in a write that shows that some things were never meant to be. |
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| Reviewed by Rozzy Diouf |
2/17/2009 |
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| oh wow! so deep, sensous and then sad. You brilliantly brought out three feelings all at once in me. Simply beautiful! welcome back...:) |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/16/2009 |
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| Your words pierce the heart. |
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| Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. |
2/16/2009 |
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What we want or wish is not necessarily what is best for us. Pain strengthens the soul.
Sincerely,
Regino |
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| Reviewed by Jack Kuperman |
2/16/2009 |
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| Powerful. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
2/16/2009 |
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| touching effective verse Reg, hope you v day was better |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/16/2009 |
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It Always Hurts My Friend,i.e. Whole Idea Is To Walk Away Never Look Back.. I Think About It-I Try Not Too...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/16/2009 |
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You have such a beautiful, loving, giving heart to be in such a state as you so painfully express. May the light of love shine brightly and bring you everylasting peace....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/16/2009 |
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Your passion is palpable in this Reg!
a poem that quivers with emotion
intensely written! Hope you find comfort soon...
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/16/2009 |
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| powerfully written--raw and emotional-very nice |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
2/16/2009 |
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| Such sorrow here, not the sweet sort. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
2/16/2009 |
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| wow.... wouldn't want to be there.... well written tho... hugs, lindalaw |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
2/16/2009 |
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Those last three lines are simply stunning.. and can be read in so many different ways...)
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
2/16/2009 |
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| Your emotions are showing so much in this poem. I feel for you. I have been through some rejection in the past. Never happy about it, but it does happen to us. Just keep your hopes up and know it isn't about you and don't put yourself down. Things sometimes are not meant to be and you are better off by yourself. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
2/16/2009 |
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| I am with Felix on this, I am not sure who this is about, but it does sound very intense and honest, and sad that still you hurt like this. Blessings, and less pain I pray for you, my friend. Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/16/2009 |
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Not sure if you are hurting for your old love or happy about your new but gripping in it's intensity.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/16/2009 |
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Regis,
Much pain in these lines ... I'm sorry.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/16/2009 |
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| Poignant poem that many can at one time relate to |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
2/16/2009 |
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| Amazingly painful write my friend...I can feel every emotion. I'm going through a bunch of it myself right now. Hope all is well...Much love, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/16/2009 |
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| Interesting feelings herein are present, pain and love seem to be an everyday combination, why can it not be different, but that is, I suppose, the way of life...e |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/16/2009 |
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| Sad write Reg but well done my friend. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
2/16/2009 |
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| ah emotions...food for the soul...everything passes in time |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/16/2009 |
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Sometimes hearing that old Dear John hurts more than a Mike Tyson special on the guts.
A bottle of 25 years old Chivas Regal is recommended.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/16/2009 |
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I bet you do Regis.
Great to read you again,
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/16/2009 |
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So sad, Regis; you are in my prayers!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;( |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
2/16/2009 |
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| Heart wrenching.... |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
2/16/2009 |
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Regis~!
A real downer my friend - I know the feeling all too well . . . a great penning!!
Blessings,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
2/16/2009 |
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| The Bear Paw could have it right, Regis, that this sounds like being on the rebound, but I have to hand it to you, you know where to rebound to. And, your poem certainly catches the mix of love, attraction and hell. Pain and pleasure, so closely related we've heard it said, but you've said it more well than it is usually done......Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Glen Schulz |
2/16/2009 |
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Nicely done way of expressing the first girls loss and your own pain.
"If you can't be with the one you love"...
*Glen* |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
2/16/2009 |
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Regis, this sounds like "being on the rebound". Well written about a hard to express emotions. Thank you for sharing...Stay Strong.
In Spirit,
Bear |
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