she only wants pretty poems
by Donna L Quesinberry
Thursday, March 19, 2009
G" by the Author.
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there was a prescription
on whispers, in
an art of love
and war. he tallied
soap stained, lanquid,
she tried to
clarify his profundities,
to no avail.
and the consistent
use of misuse
he lived in fear.
(copyright © donna l. quesinberry-2007)
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Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 10/5/2009
Intriguing poem. Deserves a second reading and a third....
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 3/23/2009
A true student of human nature! Well penned.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/21/2009
Great write...well done!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/20/2009
Hmnnn, this is so real and applies to so many. It is not gender biased for I have seen it happen to both sexes and the shell that is left over is truly sad.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/20/2009
Now this is one to read and ponder - too bad life isn't always pretty. Thank God for poets, though, who record all aspects of life, and who see the beauty amidst the ugliness of reality. I really like this one, Donna, uniquely crafted. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.