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| Reviewed by Su-Ling Wong |
4/21/2009 |
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This is an absolutely powerful and gripping piece of work. The last two lines in the final stanza are brilliant.
Also, thanks for reviewing my work! |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
4/18/2009 |
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JOISEY - PARANOIA THIS!!!
As you will note from most recent post on the subject - I no longer have any reason to fear it - IT IS GONE!
As long as I don't go bonkers and stick my tongue in a wall receptacle, I ain't gittin' ZAPPED either!
Suggest you go back & re-read BEAR PAW's story - THEY WERE TRULY LUCKY, or BLESSED!
IT only needs to happen ONCE ...
"To be Forewarned is to be Forearmed!"
AND ... you can keep all that lucky BIRDCRAP up there in JOISEY - in fact, I hope you git BLESSED with it IMMENSELY !!!
YER FIEND - (no r on purpose) - PARANOIA PENPAL ...
OH YEAH - P.S. -
RUFIE SEZ YER FARTS ARE MORE DEADLY AND DEVASTATING THAN ANY PROPANE CUD EVER BE!
:) :) :)
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
4/18/2009 |
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| Ed, I'm sitting here with a big smile on my face. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/16/2009 |
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| I've many a "bird-bomb" fall on my head. That's a good sign, or so it's been said. But concerning the issue of being blown-up in bed, it's those nasty "bed-bombs" that I really dread, lol! Sorry, Ed--blame it on Spring. Hope you never get blown to Kingdom Come by that propane son-of-a-gun... |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
4/16/2009 |
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| Lol, a few guys here is gonna be mad eh! J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Allene West |
4/16/2009 |
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| I liked this...reminds me of something/someone...rofl |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/16/2009 |
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Cute, yup, propane is sure a part of life in the west. Our Class C has a small tank for heat, hot water and cooking. Some have giant size tanks outside their homes, just a way of life, but do treat it with respect...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/16/2009 |
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I have seem two propane fires in my time, one when a hose leaked and the valve blew sending a flare of flame that started at about five feet while it was in the camp to about twenty feet when we managed to get it out and away from the camp and us...so I have healthy fear of propane and the power it can unlease.
fee |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/16/2009 |
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if a bird sh*ts on you it's said to be good luck
if your propane blows you're fu*ked
sleep well, there's no need to worry, if Jersey hasn't blown up yet i doubt you will ... |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
4/16/2009 |
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Hi Ed, This one worries, only because of the experience of my house blowing up.. cuz of propane... while we were sleeping... yep ... it blew me 14 feet out of the house and I was 5 months pregnant. Miracle that day in '89 cuz none of us were hurt. I still like cooking with propane, but I don't cuz I worry... it's a trust thing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
4/16/2009 |
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Gas, hmm Ed, you and the Gas....!!
Better check the PSI next time you fill up, make sure it's to standard hehe...What's this about Squirrels? Better backtrack.. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/16/2009 |
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Wow! You've now managed to antagonize Ma, Brother Edvard, Canuck Jasmin, and Baltimore Tom - and of course, they all told me about your nastiness to me while I was gone. Shame, Shame, Brother!
PS Rufuz also says that you've pissed off a few squirrels, too! |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/16/2009 |
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| Oh my,your so bad and so good at being BAD...Giggles...have a wonderful and SAFE day...Hugss..real cute pen... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/16/2009 |
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Ed! If I were you, I'd be hiding! LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/16/2009 |
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If I catch you flying high and shitting on me...you will be not sitting for a month of Sundays, and I telling Ma to read this unspeakable poem(?) of yours!
Edvard(k) the Noble Elder
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/15/2009 |
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Yer gonna get in trouble, Ed - LOL!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/15/2009 |
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| Jersey what are you smoking again that you see flying saucers, don't minimize the effect of gas on the brain, or for that matter in your tummy, and you talking of heaven, fat chance, don't they call you the devil? No wonder you're giving bad advice to the old folks, shame! Try to be good! Jasmin Horst |
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