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|Reviewed by Brian Hartford (Reader)
|Well crafted write. Seems to put everything in order. Maybe that is why Jesus chose to be a Carpenter! Good to see you writing again. Dora say's "hello".|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Peter, I like how you write the message in this bottle! You are strong, and hope you are doing well and staying happy... missed your writings.... life, huh? plank by plank...
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Love the grasping p's, g's and t's as proprophetic, with the first three lines of this piece - Trap, Ssst, Huff, ending with a placement of self, sad, right now.
Hope I typed this right, Peter. :)