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  Choose Me
by Sara Coslett
Saturday, June 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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I just wished and wanted and dreamed
And dreamt and schemed and kvetched for your
love to manifest itself. But

all I got was heartache and
eternal desire . . . unanswered
in darkness and light, in joy and
sadness, in sickness and health. YOU

nor I, were ever there to care.

Oh, we did, but all we showed were
words, not deeds, our actions
lost in obligatory promises.

I never saw you . . . much, you never me.
Yet . . . we cared. But did we? We needed
but we couldn’t. Our lives were separated—
as one (no two lives), in annihilation.

Our chiseled marks upon existence led to
work, family, drink, longing and sorrows.

Loss could not be any less potent than
hard tears for choices made before time
found us in its evolutionary path.

I am not sorry, but angry.

For I chose you, to choose me . . . choose me
. . . choose me . . . choose me . . . choose me.

© 2009 Sara Coslett
    



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Reviewed by Dark Knight 8/19/2012
I know what this like all too well-great poetry
Reviewed by F William Broome 7/27/2009

How well you write of the anguish of a one sided love! Yes, the endings is superb....and just right.. A great bit of writing, Sara. - Bill
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/30/2009
Excellent and powerful poem,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 6/30/2009
Wow, great ending, this desperate plea comes full circle.
Reviewed by jude forese 6/29/2009
a very powerful emotional plea for acknowledgment and support ...
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/29/2009
A write filled with emotion...or the void thereof in what was once termed love. There is much to like in this poem, but my favorite lines are the last two...

Cryssa
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/29/2009
The inTENsity of these lines - raw emotion - powerfully penned - undone, Sara. Undone -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/28/2009
wonderfully written-
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/28/2009
Sara,
This is fine writing in every way, the phrasing, the repetitions, the intensity of feeling, the understanding of loss and its consequences.
John
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 6/28/2009
Great write, Sara, of what appears to be a one-sided love affair.
The closing lines are perfect. -gene.
Reviewed by JMS Bell 6/28/2009
YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS WELL IN THIS WORK THAT EXPOSES THE DISDAIN THAT IS FELT WHEN IT'S OVER, BUT ONE STILL 'FEELS'. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 6/28/2009
Hi Sara, This is a great example on how difficult life can be when we live on emotions. Great write, Sara....

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 6/28/2009
Very nicely done, Sara! I like the repetition at the end. It can have different levels of meaning.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/28/2009
Our minds are often controlled by our hearts and sadly our hearts don't always make wise choices...hope yours does. Great write girl.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/28/2009
NICE, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

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