|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|I know what this like all too well-great poetry|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
How well you write of the anguish of a one sided love! Yes, the endings is superb....and just right.. A great bit of writing, Sara. - Bill
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Excellent and powerful poem,take care
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Wow, great ending, this desperate plea comes full circle.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very powerful emotional plea for acknowledgment and support ...|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|A write filled with emotion...or the void thereof in what was once termed love. There is much to like in this poem, but my favorite lines are the last two...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|The inTENsity of these lines - raw emotion - powerfully penned - undone, Sara. Undone -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This is fine writing in every way, the phrasing, the repetitions, the intensity of feeling, the understanding of loss and its consequences.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Great write, Sara, of what appears to be a one-sided love affair.
The closing lines are perfect. -gene.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS WELL IN THIS WORK THAT EXPOSES THE DISDAIN THAT IS FELT WHEN IT'S OVER, BUT ONE STILL 'FEELS'. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING.|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Sara, This is a great example on how difficult life can be when we live on emotions. Great write, Sara....
|Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
|Very nicely done, Sara! I like the repetition at the end. It can have different levels of meaning.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Our minds are often controlled by our hearts and sadly our hearts don't always make wise choices...hope yours does. Great write girl.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|NICE, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|