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My amusing attempt at a country song which would need a few more verses (smile).
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I couldn't belive you left at night
and you even took ol'e Spike
but what about
what about me
I think about you day and night
and sometimes about ol'e Spike
but mostly, mostly about me
Oh Spike, my darling, where are you
How could you leave me too
Leave me to wonder
Why me
You used to say you left the others
Cuz you preferred not to be smothered
but how could that apply to me
I found the bills and the letters
Received the calls from the debtors
and wondered
Why me
Oh Spike, my darling, where are you
How could you leave me too
Leave me to wonder
Why me
I tracked you down and finally found
He'd taken you to the pound
But now
Now your with me
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| Reviewed by Regis Schilken |
2/23/2011 |
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What a sad poem. Poor you--poor Spike. It would be interesting why HE came back to you.
rege |
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| Reviewed by Lamar Ingraham |
2/18/2011 |
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| I love your work, you are indeed a phonemonal writer. You humored me a bit. Do you really have a pet named Spike? Thank you for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Madden |
10/13/2010 |
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| You got your priorities right with Spike. Have you given it a tune? |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/9/2009 |
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I enjoy reading this poem,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/8/2009 |
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Awww, sure am glad you found Spike, makes life so complete and wonderful huh?
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/8/2009 |
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| OH, I AM SO GLAD YOU FOUND SPIKE...BUT THINK OF IT THIS WAY...NOW THE REAL DOG IS GONE AND I HOPE AND PRAY GOD HEALS YOUR PAIN...REAL SOON. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WELL WRITTEN WORK FILLED WITH THE ANGUISH AND DISTRAUGHT YOU FELT AT BEING SUDDENLY LEFT ALONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
7/8/2009 |
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Patricia,
Sometimes dogs are better companions then humans. Enjoyed reading this.
Mary |
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