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Asa D. Seeley

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I CRIED...
by Asa D. Seeley

Tuesday, October 06, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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NAKED


 

my

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daughter

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no

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longer

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knows

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me

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and I am the cause

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copywrite; Asa D Seeley/2009 

 

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Reviewed by Clarence Prince 11/13/2012
It's very sad, but just trust and obey God for there's no better way!Remember, He can do all things in His own good time, Asa!
Reviewed by JMS Bell 4/17/2012
COMING TO TERMS WITH THE RESPONSBILITY OF YOUR ACTIONS...FACING THE FULL 'BLUNT' OF REALITY. NOT AT ALL EASY TO DO. THANKS FOR THIS 'NAKEDNESS'. I LOVE YOU. BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Brenda Dobson 10/18/2009
Asa,

Through your pain and honest writing will come a greater sense of awareness and strength to prepare you for the precious times when you will see your daughter again.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/15/2009
Joyce, this has left me with a lump in my throat. Honest, no punches pulled...
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 10/11/2009
So sad. Life can be hard and cruel at times! Does Asa WRITE TO HIS DAUGHTER OR TRY TO KEEP IN TOUCH WITH HER MOTHER? Perhaps he can keep a journal of his feeings, write poems and letters to include in it. One day he'll be able to see her and be with her again.. He can show his daughter then, that he never forgot her!....M
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/11/2009
Concise, raw and perfect!

Janet xx
Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton 10/10/2009
These few words explode with heartfelt and pain... healing begins with acknowledgement and it is never too late! Blessings! JBS
Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/8/2009
The pain is moving.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/7/2009
..it is never too late...we can be the cause to change what will be....never give up on her or yourself!
Reviewed by Inspire Hope 10/7/2009
"I CRIED" YES I cried when I read this, and then turned away, hoping not to see it again. Joyce you just would not give up, your e-mail really touched my heart and I cried again! This poem brings back memories of my sister's son her only child who was incarcerated as a teenager with a sentence of 45 years. He has a son and it seemed that they would not know each other, he had never seen his son. There is good news prayer changes things, my nephew is now free and has since been united with his son! You may cry now but your morning is coming, and yes your daughter will know and always love you. Joyce continue to stay strong in the Lord, and keep your armor on, I just love the person that you are! There is hope!

This is a very heartfelt poem, thanks for sharing!

Love And Prayers
Always!!
Inspire
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/7/2009
... and at least two women grieve... THIS IS HEARTSTOPPING, JOYCE! I am so sorry for all of your combined pain and sense of tragedy. It is true that grief wields a mighty pain. This is right between the eyes and, as others have said, raw. But powerful good writing. Your son is a sensitive man. May his sense of guilt be assuaged and healed with reconciliation. Love and prayers, Kate xx
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 10/7/2009
raw and sad, encourage your son to write more.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/7/2009
...and the sins of the father...
Very strong!

Georg

Reviewed by Daniel Keith 10/6/2009
So sad Joyce, may the Lord guide your son to a better life. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/6/2009
Yes, sad indeed, Joyce.

John
Reviewed by Richard Arrington 10/6/2009
Very sad.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 10/6/2009
Taking ownership is the first step. And it is a big one. I hope your son is released soon and can be reunited with your daughter. Patrick
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins 10/6/2009
Sad......



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