AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Philip Hughes-Luing, iDan Ronco, iErnie Heavin, iThomas Neviaser, iSharon Burton, iLisa DAnnolfo Levey, iPatricia Garber, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

George G Asztalos

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· 8 Titles
· 8 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Oct, 2008

George G Asztalos, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
Passion's Price Book 3 in Passion Series
by Mary Adair

From an international award winner comes Passionís Price book 3 in Passion Series:Dawn's free-spirited lifestyle was like a breath of fresh air to the people in London. S..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


The Famous Poem With The Neighbours
by George G Asztalos
Saturday, December 12, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by George G Asztalos
•  The Kidnapping of Europe
•  awakening to unreality
•  I am building my afterlife before
•  Zoodeus
•  My Transsylvania from the sky
           >> View all 6

(the sweet forgoting bird of aging)

 

You never came to my house

Maybe

You went to the neighbours

I was here

Please come in and sit down

Wish I could give you something sweet

But I such finished it all

That my teeth hurts

 

I ask you red like this

Although 

I'm painfully blue

Can you give me a pain-killer?

 

Can you?

 

PHOEMIA

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Very good writing.

GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Maybe, George. Love your title and the mixing of letters! Teeth and Life, how similar, somtimes, like right now...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  You Can Have Me
  2.  Soul Mates
  3.  Petrichor
  4.  From Above
  5.  Gypsy
  6.  Love... Each Day
  7.  Mother Nature's Lesson
  8.  Porcelain Clay
  9.  'The real me'
  10.  Blind, Deaf and Thoughtless