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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/22/2010 |
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Very soul searching and deep. Sadly there are some men out there that fit this exact bill of fare. Thank you Nordette for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Geoff M. Pope (Reader) |
3/5/2010 |
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Tremendous confession, discernment, Nordette.
I especially nodded toward your last three strophes,
reminding me of "A Couple in Love" --
http://geoffpopepoetry.blogspot.com/2009/11/couple-in-love.html
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/2/2010 |
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| Pauper and coward the speaker in this piece definitely is not. Such clarity of deduction and understanding can only come from rich depths of spiritual, emotional and intellectual intelligence that probably beggars the paucity of the commitment that was offered. I love the turn with the change of pace and style of the final lines, expressing that most uncomfortable and unwelcome truth - that that which we most desire is often at odds and incompatible with that which is necessarily good for us. Acute and tender imagery for a bruising subject. So good to read you as always, Nordette. xx |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/1/2010 |
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Nordette, It is good to see you back here! This is one powerful poem. At least you recognize a bad relationship/situation and are not willing to venture down that road of pain..much wisdom in your poem!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/1/2010 |
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Much truth in these words, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/1/2010 |
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Nordette, I am in awe of your pen ... you wrote my life. These words seem to be penned for survival and sanity's sake ... beautifully penned, my new favorite of yours. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/1/2010 |
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Excellent write, Nordette, and that piccy looks like a StormSpinner kind of photo! Well done, m'dear; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
3/1/2010 |
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A good recipe for survival.
Stir over low heat- simmer uncovered.
John |
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| Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe |
2/28/2010 |
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| Hold on to these thoughts as hard as you can, if this is about you, you are worthy of so much more. Well written. Take care. |
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