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| Reviewed by Chad McLendon (Reader) |
5/30/2010 |
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| Thought provoking, yet confusing. The confusing part is not bad. It makes a person pause and think harder about the words before them. Nicely written. |
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| Reviewed by Rozzy Diouf |
5/20/2010 |
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| Star Fire.... short,precise and original! keep writing....) |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
4/30/2010 |
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Your words make me think...and I find much truth in them. Welcome to the den.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/29/2010 |
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Very nicely done..I shall look forward to more of your work. Welcome to the den, Star Fire.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
4/29/2010 |
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So, point blank - Friends no matter what they do! That would take a bigger heart that my human body has. More forgiveness than my small brain can give. I would definitely need Divine Intervention and Instruction. I've just seen too much corruption.
A Great Faith and Hope indeed you have.
Being able to take angry and turn it into Love.
May it always stay inside you.
And who knows, who else may learn it too - from you! |
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| Reviewed by Star Fire |
4/28/2010 |
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| Many have commented about this being open to interpretation, I guess I should take the mystery away. It is written in the positive sense, standing by your word and friend, even though you are totally pissed off at them. (excuse the french) Thank you all for reading my poem, I feel very welcome here and look forward to reading more. |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
4/28/2010 |
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Nice! A few very powerful words.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by James Martin |
4/28/2010 |
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Very interesting. Many interpretations possible. Welcome!
Jim |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/28/2010 |
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This suggest many possibilities to me, Star Fire. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by J M |
4/28/2010 |
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very creative---
this has such a strong mood
of defying life's animosity...
"Allegiance Be Eternal"
what an imaginative line!!!
i love this poem...
james |
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| Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe |
4/28/2010 |
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| Uplifting is the word that pops into my mind when I read this. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/28/2010 |
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Very interesting Ku, without knowing what the inspiration behind it is the reader can interpet in many ways...origianal and thought provoking for sure. Welcome to the Den...
Fee |
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