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| Reviewed by eliza keating |
8/29/2010 |
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| great piece that is full of an impowering message to all ...eliza keating |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
7/29/2010 |
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Thus I will at once and evermore
A lighthouse to the wounded who seek shore.
You go girl, and you tell them where it is at. We may be the play things that men have conjured up in their minds, but we are not going to play their silly childish games. We are human beings and we deserve respect. This poem hits the heartstrings of every woman and has a message for us to fight back the insane tyranny with which the man tugs at our soul. Good work sis, and if I had to rate this I would give ***** golden stars for form, content, imagery, and message.
Love and Hugs,
Barbie
PS: I am not at my computer. I am not even home because I am in the hospital in Traverse City, Michigan waiting to have another stent put in my heart tomorrow morning. I also have very bad renal failure and episodes of vertigo.
Take care sis, :-) |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
5/29/2010 |
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Outstanding piece of writing. Extremely well crafted. This is my first time I am reading you, it certainly will not be the last.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
5/28/2010 |
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| Excellent my friend. xxx |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/24/2010 |
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| I like this three-fold sonnet, Nordette. I especially love how the turn with the image of the "starry eyes" accords with the flashing beacon of the lighthouse in the last. And, as always, this work shines! Beautiful rhythm and flow that speaks of a hard-won peace, a grace. Oozes depth and heartfeltedness. xx |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/24/2010 |
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| your poetic muscles are well-toned and loving ... excellent work, Nordette ... |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
5/21/2010 |
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Gorgeous, Nordette! I wrote it/review, what I thought, but it was too stupid to compliment your piece, deleted it, which I ache with, now...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/20/2010 |
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| awww how stately nordette! love ur formal as well as informal skillz... |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/20/2010 |
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| One benefit maturity can bring is strength. Well penned Nordette. |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
5/20/2010 |
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Absolutely excellant on so many levels.
Hunger for poetry just got satisfied here.
Pedestal or throne?- take your pick and take your place.
John
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
5/20/2010 |
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| Well accomplished piece, Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
5/19/2010 |
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This is the precise result of writing poetry for many years and perfecting the craft. Nordette Adams, your beacon shines bright. I am honored to call you a friend, and if I may, I will visit the lighthouse to the wounded who seek shore when I am in need...a good salve for healing a broken heart...
Love,
Sage |
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