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Deception
by Sudo Nym ~ Poet in Motion
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Sometimes God speaks to me
bringing messages I don't want to hear
Sometimes I see things
in clear visions of thoughts I fear
Today was one of those days
where truth lead to dismay

A subtle sign
of seeming insignificance
Blantant in appearance
made clear its relevance
And with it my own, or rather
the lack thereof

I was left to realize
without mistaken interpretation
that my own contrived importance
was just that and nothing more

Though I yearned to be remarkable
or upheld in greater stature
I realized I was nothing special
in your eyes and heart I held
no separate space

After nearly twenty years of friendship
I was just a generic gift
Nothing special or unique
I didn't even warrant something different

How silly of me to think otherwise
to have spent decades
with blinders on my eyes
and now when I think of you
I am repulsed and in disgust

Yet realizing it is nothing more
than a mirror I uphold
to reflect the feelings which are
in fact, reflected to myself

I've been a fool so long
for believing a lie, I told myself
You are nothing more that that
which you have always been
And it is I, who have deceived myself
As always, in the end.

Sudo Nym ~ Poet in Motion
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Reviewed by Michelle Mead
I liked the part about the mirror because it seems in life the things we dislike in others are the things we dislike in ourselves. Thought-provoking piece.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Thought provoking and very well written.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Deeply introspective and meaningful, Sudo Nym. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Powerfully written.
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