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Asa D. Seeley

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I need you most...when it rains


Your full commitment to please me with pleasure

...matters not

Our bed games are not intimacy

...they are nothing more than second and third

hand actions...performed out of wants

But when it's a rainy day and you take my hand

...and walk with me

Knowing that you will get drenched

...with uncomfortable wetness

This is the definition of true love...

which is called...sacrifice

 

 

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Reviewed by David Blair
Enjoy your writing Asa. You have a sound message to the site's readers. Glad you enjoyed On The Moon.
Reviewed by Odin Roark
or... as on a different level---that of "friendship": a friend is someone who's there for you when they'd rather be anywhere else. with love, especially when it transcends object necessity, is a state of mind, not body.
Reviewed by JMS Bell
THE BIRDS AND BEES DO IT...BUT WHAT THIS POET ENVISIONS IS SO MUCH DEEPER THAN THAT. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Ruan Mills Burke
You certainly know how to set a scene, Asa. The image this creates in the mind's eye is absolute. I can feel the coolness of the rain and the softness of a hand holding mine as I read. Very nicely penned.
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
There is much depth and wisdom in this poem. Asa has captured the essence of love and the commitment that goes with it...M
Reviewed by Z McClure
In a culture that has misunderstood what love truly is, Asa's poem shines like a beacon in the darkness...
I hope and ask the Lord to open many eyes.

-Z.B.McClure
Reviewed by Art Sun
Nice work...love is an emotion that is hidden, until we come to realize its many characters within us...

nice...
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
I agree with both Christine's - emotional & beautiful
intimate and profound.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
His words are beautiful...
there is no sacrifice to walk in the rain
it is a pleasure to share such beautiful moments
with another person...even a friend...
Love's passion and pleasure is a circumference
of all things shared

Love's Bounty & Pools
Vickie
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Asa, this is truly beautiful. Keep on writing.
Blessings to you and your Mom :-)

ann
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Beautiful poetry, Asa! You have captured the essence of true love in your lovely phrasing! Heartfelt write!

Anna
Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Beautiful poem Asa. Keep sight of true love and follow your heart with the knowledge the Lord has blessed you with. Keep your faith and stay strong. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
great mood in this poem. Morgan
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Mood, emotion, feeling and thoughtfulness are all combined in this poem. Very nicely done, Asa. Keep writing.
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Dear Joyce this a wonderful poem that Asa wrote last year. Thank you for sharing it. Love Emile
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Joyce, Asa has written this with such emotion..it is beautiful! thanks for sharing this..I hope he is doing good~
Love,
Chrissy
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Asa demonstrates real feeling, Joyce, and understands the difference between what does and doesn't matter...giving to others is the true path.

John
Reviewed by George Carroll
Marvelous
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Most insightful and worthy of reflection; thank you for sharing Asa's philosophy, Joyce. Love and blessings to you and to him,

Regis
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Excellent piece of writing.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Paul Berube
An excellent write, my friend. God bless.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Your eloquent poem models a deeper intimate connection, a profound poem.
Blessings,
Christine
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