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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/21/2010 |
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| "Ameliorate balms", where upon this earth could they not bring positive change and good will? Good intentions are usually the balms of disappointment. When the will to see them through to successful conclusion becomes diluted with delusions. Vickie your poem is, "just an old fashioned love song sung in three part harmony". And I love the melody my dear fiend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/18/2010 |
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Like a fairy tale, Vickie. I enjoyed the opening descriptions the most. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
11/17/2010 |
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| enchanting, lighting the fireflies, beautiful ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
11/17/2010 |
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This is unfair. Such a woman of vast beauty, driving men to distraction.
lol. Must keep a look out for such nymphs.
This has depth of such enchantment, that a book, novel would hold the reader enchanted, spec's when the cover has the bio pic of a real beaut!
Divine and magical spellbinding poem. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/17/2010 |
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Love this!!!
Extraordinary feel to this, most enchanting of themes.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/17/2010 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
11/16/2010 |
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How enjoyable are your passions as you excite the heart of others...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
11/16/2010 |
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Victoria, they named you right. You certainly know
how to write a love song. -gene.
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/16/2010 |
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A goddess moves through my world here, Vickie,
and i'm warmed by her beauty, grace and knowing.
John |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
11/16/2010 |
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I could use some ameliorate right now. This piece was actually very well defined. I liked it because of it's healing power. A writing very well done.
NAMASTE with LOVE
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/16/2010 |
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Beautiful composition Vic loved the line "she lights fireflies across thhe imbue skies"...well done.
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