|Reviewed by Robert Johnson
|Very nice. Each section stands on its own yet they combine into a nice story.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|This isn't what I meant about numerical structure. I was thinking about acrostics and other poetic structures that are more numerical than literal.
You give a number of good reasons for aging gracefully. I, however, still find young chicks attracted to me, if only in a fatherly way. The older chicks get a little more romantic.
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|so glad i found you now i'm moving on to 'we met inparadise'...and richard needs to think bigger than 10 more years of keeping his wits...methinks...pat|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Edward, great job. My first belly buster of the day. Also my first time reading your work. I’ll be back and I'll be checking out your other works. I'm 66 peeking at 67 and hoping to retain my wits, sense of humor and health for another 10 years or so. Your poem gives me hope.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Happy Birthday sweet man...your still a baby LOL age is nothimg but a number....stay safe and well and remember keep smiling OK...Hugsss|