|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Your words belong in a Valentine card. Cheers|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|The poem has a lot of depth and says much with few words! It's beautiful!...M|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|...perhaps as one, unknown to others, but still one. Beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski
|Unconditional love is what you have spelt there. Totally lovely and loveable. You are so gifted, keep writing.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson
|Beautiful. This poem makes one did deep to see if onr has done that for the ones we love.
One thing I would add, We always need you in every way you need to be needed.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THIS POET KNOWS WHAT HE IS LOOKING FOR. FOR HE IS SEARCHING FOR THAT KIND OF 'TREASURE' SOUGHT BY SO MANY MEN. A 'GOOD THING'(PROV 31:10-31), NOT YET FOUND. KEEP THE FAITH, MY SON. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE AND MUCH BLESSINGS. JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Beautifull phrased, Asa,
no excess, no mush, and such admirable control
gives the work the depth and resonance of good writing.
Thank you, Joyce, for this posting.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|He certainly has his Mom's writing talent. That was a very sensetive
poem. And a very good one.
God bless You
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Asa, there is a depth beyond the purity of your words--it is written in the 'in-betweens' and soft pauses. This is a complete and selfless love, ever-giving. Beautiful! God bless ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|That is lovely. I know about love and giving it and getting none back. Thank you for sharing Asa's thougts. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|Asa is gifted. his time in prison won't be wasted when he continues to write his heart.|
|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|Fantastic! Words of love from the soul. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|"Solid" like The Rock.
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Beautiful...every word counts...
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautiful poetry, Asa!!! Loved the ending....wistful and promising! Keep on writing...you are certainly one with the quill!
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|pretty & precise. Morgan|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Lovely, well done Asa|
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|yes, short and sweet.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|This poem is short, precise, and says a great deal. Tell, give, and show; how could we ask for more. Very thoughtful!|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|This is a great one, Joyce. Please give him my best.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is definitely a higher love. Beautiful reflection!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Romance from the heart.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Profound, Asa, and rich in the words of love. -gene.|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|This is truly beautiful and so heart warming indeed Laura