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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/10/2011 |
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Beautiful writing, William,
elegant, passionate, resonant.
John |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
4/8/2011 |
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Extremely well done,William. I like your idea creative poetry.
Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/7/2011 |
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| SOFT AND LOVELY WILLIAM...INDEED, A NEW DAWN. WRITTEN WITH ROMANTIC TENDERNESS. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
4/7/2011 |
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| not only romantic but very sensual. great work. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/6/2011 |
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This beautiful poem is dusky and sensuous William...what a way to start a day!
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/5/2011 |
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Phew!!!! Love the way this morning is beginning....yours is the second passionate sonnet I've read this morning.....awesome writing, my friend!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/4/2011 |
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Words of rapture, so gently enchanting the reader..the red type mirroring the passion, really enhances the words significantly...
Hugs, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/4/2011 |
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| a passionate,sensual beauty,William |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/4/2011 |
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Breath taking sweet man...Hugsss keep well and always safe my dear friend
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/3/2011 |
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Such heated thoughts and warm sensuality exuded from each line but with a dash of love thrown in to sweeten the mix. Well done William.
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/3/2011 |
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Wonderful writing, William; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/3/2011 |
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| Up at the crack, of Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/3/2011 |
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| Ain't love grand. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/3/2011 |
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Wow! This sparkles :)
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/3/2011 |
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| HOT! |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/3/2011 |
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William, love the way this beauty flows from line to line
to the climax, that infinite ectasy. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/3/2011 |
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Just what I needed to read on this beautiful (54 degrees) sunny afternoon.
I feel the urge to finish this one, it could have been a collaboration indeed my sweet collaborator..
Panting from total submission,
she moaned like a sated tigress.
His hands felt so good,
strong and knowing.
Only he could bring her to the peak,
that place where infinite ecstasy dwells,
where two lover's arrive
to glory in the sea of golden lava.
The dawning of a new day,
catapults the two lovers
into the reality of their union,
longing for more nights of pleasure.
Can each time be as good as the last,
time will tell,
ecstasy will prevail,
and A New Dawn has begun.
I guess I liked your poem, William...lol
Peace love and light,
Amber
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/3/2011 |
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A passionate piece, William. I like the contrast between the soft and the hard lines that are his traveling hands. Nicely penned!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/3/2011 |
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| Why do I feel like taking a cold shower everytime I read you...? ;-)e |
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